Part 1 is off the charts, perfect escalation of conflict, and a great way of moving and seperating individuals.   Wonder whats happening to Shippo, Sesshomaru, if InuYasha is truly dead,  and Kohaku.  

This is really getting good. 

Hey I just want to say I really like how you have this story going so please keep going past chapter 6

Very good and developing  nicely, hoping for more!

I have been waiting for the chapters for this particular story

Hi sorry about that but will it include rape? If so I am not sure I can read since it's a little too much for my taste! I adore the fic but you should put a warning at the beginning when one starts to read so we know what to wait for. The chapter made me feel bad honestly! I am not trying to be rude ok? It's purely my opinion! But the scenes are too dark! I so much enjoyed this fic and waited for a strong kagome! I know she will survive and get stronger even if she will be raped but still... And run! Poor inocent Rin! I so much enjoyed your Rin! She usually is stereotypical but yours came alive and now this! I Also know maybe you don't want to go the damsel in distress way and have sesshoumaru or shippo help save her but... 

I feel so sad now! And I so looked forward to a pleasant reading! Not your fault! Sorry! Your writing is amazing! It's just not my cup of tea, anyone is entitled to his own likes, no disrespect meant!

Keep writing and creating! 

Good luck and take care!

Hopefully you will not go too dark and include rape.  If so I will sadly not continue to read.  Hopefully Sesshoumaru will smell Rins blood and come to help.

I don't know how this story will go, and if i was being honest with myself I'm actually kind of afraid to read more. x_x Regardless, I will try and read it since its been so interesting so far >.<

Nice update and a litle more informative.

So the beast that killed Inuyasha and severly injured Sessho has shown himself and probably aducted Kagome and the others. Whatever will he do with them? This is getting really deep now. I hope that Sessho gains more memories in order to find out that Rin and Kagome have gone missing now. I hope Kagome finds out that the evil beast is the one that killed Inuyasha and now may think that Sessho is dead also.

I think it's a good idea to post your A/N on your profile page with the answers to reviewer's questions and other stuff.

Excellent writing as usual and keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next update.

So sesshoumaru was there with inuyasha?

Damn that powerhungry monger!  Kagome was admirable! I just was confused how they disappeared? They were taken by that demon or Kagome or shippo somehow pulled a hoodini? Sorry 

Also the inu lady decided to go! I hope she will soon meet Kagome and team up! I love a pair of strong females! 

Sesshoumaru is strong to survive that head injury! Hope we will see more of him soon!

One question though, please warn me if there will be rape included since for me that is a sensitive theme!

I really enjoy your fic very much, I like the details you include! 

Thx for updating! 

I hope nothing bad happens to Kagome, this is a dark fic but I don't know how dark you are going to go.  Hopefully salacious abuse is not included.

So sorry about that long space in my review. I don't know what I did...something stupid...lol

Ah, this was another very good chapter.

Rin seems to be getting a little fiesty and developing a backbone. I feel sorry for Shippo...he loves Rin but Rin loves Kohaku...kind of sad but I think he will find someone else. Hey what if that fox disguised as a monk was actually a female fox hehehe that would be cute. Hey ealier in this chapter or maybe in chapter 3, Rin said something to the fact that Shippo was too young for her is it because Shippo is still childish looking? If he has 7 tales should he not be taller and centuries older than her anyway? He is stronger now if he can shape shift into a winged beast and was able to carry all of them and maintain that shape for a longer period of time.

Now for Sessho...what can harm him that bad and had him wander around for a year? Maybe it was him that sent Inuyasha's clothes and sword back to Kagome? Maybe he and Inuyasha was fighting this beast or whatever together and Yasha was killed and Sessho barely survived with some of his memories missing? Who knows?

Excellent writing and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Great job!!! 

i find myself eagerly waiting for this fic! its in the top list at the moment! the pace of the progress is good and i like how you built your words, adding details! 

i like inukimi but wonder why she can't leave? its maybe because if she leaves some other youkai can try and take the throne?

...and kagome is in the snake pit! i wonder if sesshoumaru is n the dungeons in the same castle?

but i bet this is more a kagome centric fic to show her progress and birth as an empress? 

thx for updating will eagerly wait for more!

Wonderful job so far!

Wah!! So exciting! Things are certainly starting to take off now and the mys deepens. Dun, dun, dun, DUN!!! And, no need to worry oveuch about your proofreading; the chapters flow nicely and any errors are few and to me a non issue. I look forward to your next update to see how thing continue to unfold...

OH!! What if Inuyasha isn't really dead, but something caused his beast to lose control and he's the terror in the East??? Or, maybe it could be Sesshoumaru?? oh! So many questions and possibilities!!! Wah!! Can't wait!!! XD

So inuyasha death isn't as simple as it first seemed no? And at the same time sesshoumaru disappeared? Not good! Not good at all! I know inukimi wanted to keep all under wrap but the fact that the news of inuyasha s death didn't reach them is weird. Or something or someone made it impossible for news to reach. Hmmmm

Kagome is feeling something is off but what? 

How I see it this is an alternate reality world universe? Or something erased the youkai from history!

The kitty episode reminded me of my kitty how I slept with her on my neck lol! 

Thx for updating! This becoming better and better and I find myself eagerly waiting for updates!

Thx for updating! I enjoyed the chapter a lot!

Ah, the story is starting to pick up speed now. I think this chapter is nicely written for it not to be looked over by a beta...great job!!!

So now we have confirmation that Sessho is indeed MIA (mising in action) if his mother is worried and asking for Inuyasha and his group to go looking for him. Alas, the Lady Mother is so not updated of the situation in Edo and of the where abouts of her son. The plot thickens...yeah!

I am so looking forward to future chapters with Sessho in them so we can find out what has become of him.