Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Jul 2017

Uh ok thos is different I admit! But whats with the alcohol. She does seem a little addicted rather than just stressed


Master_sword1 (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 Jun 2017

Omg I liked it!!!


blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Jun 2017

Kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Jun 2017

This was a very nice start to a great story.  I like how you detailed Kagome's emotions about the marriage, and I absolutely enjoyed how you portray Kagome's flaws.  I was quite sad when I realized there wasn't more to read.  I look forward to seeing how you take this story further.


iin (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

I think the genre isn't only humor, but drama too...Like a bitter comedy...I'm crying in a few part of story...I agree bout she too easy to forgive sesshy...

But the story is realistic..thank's

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

Loved the story and of course it was very nicely written. You did a wonderful job in drawing out Kagome's feelings and angst. Her turmoil of feeling betrayed and left out was totally relatable. In my point of view, she forgave Sesshomaru too easily and he didn't seem too remorseful about what he did ten years prior. 

It would be nice to have a sequel or epilogue. You already said that you did not care too much for sequels but this one seems to scream for one more closing chapter. Lol...btw I take it that Touga, Sess and Inuyasha are human in this story?  Great job!


Molly Hooper Holmes (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

This is such a delightful story! I love all the little details you wove in, and the hilarious insight into Kagome's thought process. Can't wait for the sequel! 


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

Lol this was awesome. I very much enjoyed it! Excellent writing skills.


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jun 2017

Well you certainly can make a fic angsty! I love your fics! Love is not perfect life is not easy and no one is perfect but she forgave him too easily. I guess she loves him too much but I would leave him to grovel a little even though he is not one to do it. It was beautiful but it didn't leave such a good er... Satisfaction? At the end. He betrayed her even though he didn't believe it so. She started drinking to forget. He even had lovers, kagome was lost in the jungles but she wanted to stay with him, so I guess what he did cut too deep in her heart. It is because I myself believe that once lost the trust can't be retained and if he abandoned her once in that cruel way he can do it again. It's amazing how real you made this how deep and touching! I thank you for sharing this beautiful piece! Looking forward to more from you!


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