I was slightly skeptical in the beginning but by the end I'm terribly pulled in and can't wait for more. 

I hope you and your family remained safe and I am so sorry for what you have had to be going through. All my best wishes ????

I do hope you are doing Ok! I also live in Texas but luckily nowhere near the Hurricane. I'm praying for your well-being!

Thanks for letting us know. Yet don't worry about it real life happens. I will continue to pray for all of those affected by the hurricane. Stay safe and come back to us when you can but do not stress over it.

Oh my gosh! I never thought I could love a story from just the 1st chapter but goodnes this is good! Please continue~!

This is a pretty common concept, but you've given it your own twist. I'm interested to see where this goes. I wonder if you'll have one of the shadows make it over to Inuyasha's side with Kagome... Why could others from her time all gcross over (especially without touching Kagome)? What organization was that theif a part of? How does this current threat connect to the Warring States Era? Where is the jewel?


There were some grammatical errors, and yu meandered from the action to talk about the past for a bit (instead of focusing on Eri's dead body/blood stains), but this is a good first draft. Looking forward to more.

Best,
Animefreak242

This is a pretty common concept, but you've given it your own twist. I'm interested to see where this goes. I wonder if youll have one of the shadows make it over to Inuyasha's side with Kagome... Why could they all go? What organization was that theif a part of? How does this current threat connect to the Warring States Era?


There were some grammatical errors, and yu meandered from the action to talk about the past for a bit (instead of focusing on Eri's dead body/blood stains), but this is a good first draft. Looking forward to more.

Best,
Animefreak242

It's really good. Really exciting to read, I wonder what will happen next. I hope Kagome is alright, her flashlight battery died, oh no!. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more of story. ^.^

Ohh I like this so far! I'm interested to see what happens when they get to the past. Will time have moved differently? Will the Shadows follow them somehow? Why won't her powers work against them? 

It's really good!

Me gusta la presentación de la situación y la trama en general suena interesante, espero leer más pronto.

No abandones! 

Saludos

I love the story!! It is different and you write well, it would be interseting to see her modern friends in feudal era. I am eager to see how the story unfolds. Maybe later we would come to know more about the shadows! Gr8 start! 

I like this and it's very intriguing so far I'm hooked please update like 10 mins ago plsssss!!!!!!!!

Wow. Just wow. Loving this new concept with a new evil. I'm so excited to read the chapters as they surface

OMG! This is going to be even better than the other 2 stories that I'm following. Good concept. I hope Kagome makes it. Next chapter please.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I have loved all of your stories and this one seems to be the next to hold me in its grasp. Please update soon!!

I'm anxious to know how this story plays out. I love all your other stories and usually am content to stay silent in the shadows but you have piqued my interest! Keep writing and I hope for an update soon!

Great so far!  I can't wait to read more.

Oh my god that was so good please continue this! I cant believe all her friends are going through the well. I cant wait until next chapter you describe moments so well i was practially on the edge of my seat.

Fantastic! Please continue this story!

please please continue  this is great

Well it is definitely catching! It got me curious! The tension was palatable! Now i am curious?how this happened and why! And where did she go? Can't wait to see more so please write more! Thx for posting!