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Natalia (Chapter 7) - Mon 03 Apr 2017

So she went when she was needed? I bet it's the events that her professor told them about! A good and touching chapter! Thx,  just one friendly advice, make a distinction between her thoughts, when she is thinking to herself or talking to herself because it wasn't very clear! I am not saying this just to be rude i like the chapter but i didn't understand was she talking or thinking to herself! In rest very good! And please update! Thx a lot for updating!


Samara (Chapter 6) - Sun 02 Apr 2017

No!! What an awful but exciting cliff-hanger.  I love your story so far.  Please continue..


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Sun 02 Apr 2017

Very nice chapter. It is starting to pick up now. Kagome left without feeding her cat, what's going to happen to Marshmellow now. Who knows how long she will be gone or if she will ever make it back through the well again. What a conumdrum. Good luck Kagome...lol  :).

Great writing, keep up the good work and I will be looking for more chapters soon.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 6) - Sat 01 Apr 2017

Wahoo! Back to the past!


Inudemoness (Chapter 6) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

Ohh my god!!! Update soon!!! Loved the chapter!


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

Now that is starting to get interesting! So curious for more! Thx for updating!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

Sorry about the errors in my recent review. I have been up all night and it is now 5:20 A.M. I also have a sucky laptop that does not have a good space bar and my words tend to run together if I don't slam my fingers down hard enougn to spcae them. I know I messed up but I hope you get the gist of what I was saying. Please forgive that long space towards the end. Thank you.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

This is an intriguing story that I feel that will become one of my favourites. Of course it will start off slowly because you have to buildup and give background on the main characters. Kagome is your one of your main characters. You are doing quite well in that area especially in your discription of Kagome. I like your writing style. I did see a couple of two or three spelling errors but nothing that would detract from the story, they were hardly noticeable. Don't ask me which chapters they were in because I could not tell you, so it is unimportant. Your writing is excellent in my opinion. The story has mystery, possibly love between my favored pairing and most likely action and and a bit angsy with some romance and a happy ending I hope lol.

Your summary suggests to me that Kagome will be going back to the past to find out what really happened to Sessho and maybe change the history a bit to get the truth. In Kagome's future are there any demons in the open or diguised or non-existant? Maybe if she changes history somewhat that part may change also...just a thought. If there was a war going on maybe Kagome knows enough about it keep it from happening and saving Sessho's life and lands from greedy jealous hands. Tis is interesting and I will continue to follow this storyto see how it turns out.

Good luck to you and keep up the good work. So far great job! I will belooking forward to more and maybe longer chapters. (please and maybe) :)  lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Natalia (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

HM.... wel some readers don't like long monologue without dialogue and chapters where not much happens. add some inner monologue at least or snippets of rememberring... this is just an advice, take it or leave it. its like four chapters that not much happened, except her dream and finding out about sesshoumaru. good luck with everything, will be waiting for more! i am certanly curious how yo;ll spin this.


Natalia (Chapter 2) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

her intuition is keeping her on her toes! LETS SEE WHAT'S NEXT!


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

firt of alldon't worry if this doesn't get many reviews, this chapter is more like a prologue, setting the stage so some readers wait for the main actors to apear. on other point it is good, the writtingis fluid, desciption is good i even felt bored like her:) got my curiousity. will be waiting for more! good luck!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

Poor Kags, I hope she gets to go home and stay home soon...


Inudemoness (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Okay i like how you are building up this story but its also making me very curious and i want to know what happened to Sesshomaru.....You are doing a gr8 job! I hope you will keep on updating regularly.


SesshyGome (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!


Toni (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

i just finished your story - i like it - it gives a special twist to the story especially since there is no mention of Inu.  so that is the mystery Kagome has to unravel - 

looking forward to more chapters. 


mimi (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

This has the makings of a very interesting story. I agree with you the beginning of the story slow/drawn out but if this going to be a very lengthy story, which are the ones I prefer, you need that slow build up. It gives you something you can sink your teeth into. So keep going I'd like to know where you take this. 


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Hmm interesting so far...longer chapters please 


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