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Koree (Chapter 16) - Fri 25 May 2018

Great chap


unique (Chapter 9) - Tue 08 May 2018

Empress in the palace... I love that serie. Wonderful story..


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Apr 2018

Well, I'm sad for Kagome but sometimes the things that we want are just... impossible. Very nice chapter.


princess of the western lands (Chapter 16) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

Wonderful update. That was good interaction between sesshomaru and kagome. I like how things are progressing and with each chapter you move things along. Will the next chapter be longer? I wonder how the dinner will go with those two? 

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


KShadeslady (Chapter 16) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

I was so glad to see this update. Very nice. She handled herself well. Thanks for updating. Cheers!


Skylar (Chapter 16) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

So sweet! Loving the proverbs that are being weaved into the story. Very unique.


Koree (Chapter 15) - Wed 21 Mar 2018

Hmmm i love this story already 


JeniNeji (Chapter 15) - Mon 19 Mar 2018

Interesting story. Thanks for writing. 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 15) - Sat 17 Mar 2018

OMFG! I love this love triangle between Kagome, Sesshomaru and Inutaisho. It's so hard to find stories with this threesome. Thanks for this great fic.


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Tue 13 Mar 2018
im glad you're comeback, im searching your story many times.can't wait for the next

Kagaku-sha (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Jun 2017

Hey, if you happened to come to the reviews to see what's happening with this story... according to samantha, you can find it on adultfanfiction:Koshitsu no Sokushitsu *Imperial Concubine* -:- By : Joo777-.


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 15) - Fri 26 May 2017

HI! I see you said you were moving the fic but I couldn't find it on Adult fanfiction. Where are you moving it to? Have you moved it?inu


None (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 May 2017

Not bad, it is interesting but the lack of proper punctuation makes things a bit of an eyesore.  Apostrophe's are neccessary when using contractions and possessives, like 'I'll for I will' or 'Kagome's for something that belongs to her specifically'.  The lack of apostrophes in the proper place happens throughout chapter 1.  I couldn't read beyond the first few paragraphs without noticing the lack through repetitive sentences.  Some words are misused too.  Lite for example means less calories in things like beer, or something that is lightweight.  Lit or light or alight refer to something being lit on fire like a candle.

I can only suggest editing or beta-reading to help improve the story's readibility.

It is a good idea, I was intrigued when I first started reading, but the errors were too consistent.  I was constantly distracted trying to mentally fix what I was reading.  Good start, but it needs polishing.

 

 


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Sun 30 Apr 2017

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 15) - Fri 28 Apr 2017

Good chapter and was pleasantly pleased with the extra update. Thank you for that.

I think the white floer or lotus blossom represents Kagome and the red lotus represented Izoyia (sp).

Looking foward to more great chapters. Great writing work!


Jennn (Chapter 15) - Thu 27 Apr 2017

Ah can you update just one more time so we can see what happens in the study ;) I was so excited when I saw this update!! Can't wait for the next chapter!


KShadeslady (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Apr 2017

Very nice update. Since he doesn't have to walk in those ridiculous shoes, he has no idea how difficult it is. Now just an observance. Are you using a beta? There are so many grammar, punctuation and misused word errors in these last two chapters that it was difficult to read without mentally making corrections. Your history research is wonderful but you really need to more carefully edit your story. You have a wonderful,  intricately woven story and I love it. Proper editing will only make it more polished.  Thanks so much for updating so soon. 


Sessygurl (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Apr 2017

Kagome would be the pink I think for the rebirth and purity. I cannot wait to see what happens next. 


Leticia (Chapter 14) - Wed 26 Apr 2017

Yay!! She'll have a friend now looking good forward to the next chapter 


Blommie8 (Chapter 14) - Wed 26 Apr 2017

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