I usually come in to a story almost done on this site, so imagine my surprise when I find this one is only one chapter into the story! I'm so excited to go on this adventure with you and the other readers! Keep it up, and I anxiously await the next chapter!
genesis (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Feb 2017
Oh my gods. Such a cliffhanger!!~°·°
I am really really really really looking forward to the next update! Sesshomaru is definitely kill first ask questions later guy... Home should have remembered lolz.
But I can believe Inupapa really died in her arms how was is that
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dxlmao (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Feb 2017
The beginning was confusing, but as it progressed I started to understand more. I actually really like the concept of your plot and I'm kind of disappointed with how you just glossed over Kagome and Inu no Taisho's meeting and his subsequent passing of the swords. Are you going to explain the mark? Is Kagime in a completely different reality? Because I mean, their dad died when he wasnt supposed to, unless Kagome found him after the fight with Takemaru. It could happen but from my pov I feel like he died in the castle. Lol I mean I know this is the first chapter, but in my personal opinion, there was so much more you could have done.
Angie (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Feb 2017
OMG what the hell's going to happen next! I need to know!
You're a great writer by the way.
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Feb 2017
Really nice, hope you keep going. It felt a little short but it was really good.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Feb 2017
Okay, I'm hooke. More please.
Somiant (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Feb 2017
Great start ,personalities on point. can't wait for next chapter .Thanks for sharing
Great start with kagome and inutaisho, although i was hoping for a little more interaction between tbem. A very interesting start with sesshomaru and kagome "looking into the face of a stranger". What will happen now that kagome is dead? Will tenseiga save her life?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Lorena (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Feb 2017
Chapter 1 and Kagome's already dead?! Did she go further into the past? I am confused, but excited
this has cought my interest so please updat when you can your cliffy will annoy me to no end untill i know what happes XD
Aw man! Why did you end it there? I'm on the edge of my seat here! I can tell this is going to be an awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Interesting so far...next chappie please
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