This is a good fic. I wish it were complete.  I hope you get to finish it.

Oh my gosh the pain Kags must be in right now! This story is so very interesting!

hm..... I admit that I myself like works with more dialogue, but reading this was nice. describing inner workings and justifying SEsshoumaru's behaviour is not an easy task.

as for kagome's inner demon literaly.... well is he a shadow/posesing demon that is using a tainted shard? or is he a demon escaped from the jewel? hm so many theories, running in my mind... he is keeping her body weak and hurt so she can't concentrate on the illusions? the imagery and comparison with a bird with broken wings is tragically beautiful. its true that her shoulder is like a wing but kagome will fly again I am sure of it. also that it is obviously scared of her and Sesshoumaru and still uses her... so many questions and nothing seems clear, not his goals wishes, powers... its getting frustrating for us readers butt he tension is keeping us on the edge, like running up a blade's sharpness. it is definetely scared of Sesshoumaru but whatabout her purpose? is he refering to some sort of premonition or old oracle tale? or his own idea of a future role for her? he fears her but can't kill her, i think he isn't able to and is keeping her fooled that he can and God I hope she will soon snap out of it and will stop being miserable. yes Inuyasha doesn't love her the way she wants, he still cares for her, they all do so she can't give up. 

will wait ore! i feel this will just keep escalating further and further. but it is beautiful...

thx for writing it and good luck in continuity.

p.s my spell check isnt working for some reason, apologiez for the grammar!

take care!

I like the turns of this story, very interesting! I like the idea that kagome being possesed and sesshomaru being protective and ungentle for these chapters. I hope in the future he will come to care for her and start being gentle. I'm curious of what kind of person is this weapon smith? Is he strong and possessed some kind of power that's why everyone seek him? Well...we'll just find out to your next update.

Thank you for giving us another reading pleasures. Goodluck!

Wow, this is pretty cool :)

Hi from Germany! I love this story very much. Please write more for us soon.

How I love this story! I am checking every day for an update.

Oh man! This chapter was really cool! Her wrestle with the monster creature blog thing was fun to read. Poor Kagome though! Will Sessy really not help her??? Kagome, hang in there! Waiting for the next chapter!

What...is this piece of amazingness? I have so many questions! Does this mean I'm going to use my lunch break at work to read fanfiction? Oh wait. I'm kind of already doing that. Already got my Naruto fix. Time for some Inuyasha. Off to read the rest and give my opinion. I was mostly just following your other fic, but I might have another fave here.Why are my favorite authors updating their stuff today when I need to be productive? Arg!

The cliffhanger that isn't a typical cliffhanger. You're always surprising me. I was so happy to see some Sessy action in this chapter. Ah, you write him so well. Is he maybe like one of your novel characters? Maybe that's why you do so great with writing him? These fast updates are intense. How do you write so fast and still so well? These chapters aren't short, either. 

PLEASE update ASAP! I must know what happens! Did she break free? Is she going to be ok? What about her shoulder? How's that going to affect everything?!

Hello again! I really enjoyed this chapter, not just because of how well-written everything is, but because I can see that we are approaching the first climax in the story. This is really exciting!

SPOILERS BELOW:

I'm tempted to say that Kagome did not, in reality, kill this merchant. What do we actually know about these men? The scene with them was very short and certain clues were dropped here and there that indicated this may all have been an illusion. The creature clearly wants to corrupt Kagome's pure soul and her essence, which won't give up fighting no matter what. At the end of the scene, Kagome blacks out, which is wierd because that's never happened to her before while being contolled. Something is clearly different this time, and I can't wait to find out what that is! Of course, I could just be talking nonsense. Maybe that's not what you have planned at all, but we won't know until next time.

As for Sesshoumaru, I don't have much to say except that I adore the way you write him, both in this and Limerance. He is very much in character, and I find it interesting to see how you shape each Sesshoumaru a little bit differently in both of these stories. 

I'm sorry if I overanalyze your work. Bad habit from being an editor I guess. I just can't resist. See you in the next part!

-Thief

The way you write is so enjoyable to read! I feel like I can vividly imagine your story. I love that this story doesn't follow the typical "Kagome is a perfect super all-powerful priestess" plot. You made her character relatable, realistic, and flawed. You are truly talented!!! Hoping to see more of Sesshomaru's character development! ^_^

You have ANOTHER awesome story cooking? This is really neat so far

Nooooooooooooooooooooo! What a cliffhanger! PLEASE write more ASAP! You can't leave us like this...Your writing has changed so much. I can't believe how much you improved with so little time. When I read your note, I didn't get what there was to improve. I always thought your writing was awesome and was jealous cuz I'm not such a good writer on my own. Great job on this!

This story's come back! I was NOT expecting that at ALL!!! Would you say its weird if I told you that I literally read this story like a few weeks ago and was thinking how sad that it wasn't continued? So happy you want to remake it. I'm here waiting!

Holy smokes! This was one dynamic chapter. Looks like we have even more questions opening up here. What are these creatures, and why is Kagome the only one that can see them? As always, the descriptions and imagery along with pacing and sentence structure are wonderful in leading us through what's happening. Kagome's strength really comes through here, I think, as we see how desperate she is to protect her friends, even ones like Sesshoumaru! 

Their encounter in the field was tense and brilliant. Just like "Limerance" you really have a grasp on his character and write him completely IC (at least in my book). His subtlety is perfect. For example, when he gave her his long hard stare or when he stayed beside her rather than leaving her, all of that speaks volumes about his character without you having to spell it out for us. I love it! 

I absolutely can't wait until the next update of both of your stories. 

-Thief

Oh no! Run kagome run! How did she use her powers of they were sealed away? That definetly says something about her will power. I hope she can fight off that thing. But it doesn't sounds like it, and now the suspense is killing me!

See you in the next chapter!

NO WAY. I can't believe this is real! You're working on this story again?! This is so awesome! The first two chapters so far are so great! Very different from what I remember about the original, but still exciting and suspenseful. I really can't wait to see how you rewrite this and where you take it. Hopefully, you'll keep all of the delicious tension between Kag and Sess!

If this fic continues I will find myself with a new obsession. .. this is my first time reading this fic. I wasn't around to read the first version,  but I have high hopes for this one! 

See you in the next chapter!!