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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Sun 29 Mar 2020

Good chapter.


teresa daniel (Chapter 20) - Sat 28 Mar 2020

HI LOVE THE FANFIC, GREAT BEGINNING ....BUT I WISH YOU WOULD UPDATE MORE OFTEN...THIS STORY SEEMS LIKE ITS GOING TO TAKE FOREVER TO FINISH....SO MUCH HAS TO HAPPEN BEFORE THE END....SEEMS LIKE THERE ARE STILL MANY SECRETS SURROUNDING KAGOME....HOPE THAT AT LEAST THOSE COME TO LIGHT REAL SOON...............ANYWAY.....I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE QUICKLY....I REALLY HOPE KAGS DOES AWAY WITH KIKYO REALLY SOON I'M GETTING SICK OF HER CRAP .....SHE'S SUCH A NASTY HO! HOPE INUYASHA FINDS OUT REAL SOON SHE'S RUTTING MEN LEFT AND RIGHT....(HOPE SHE GETS CAUGHT IN THE ACT  BY INUYASHA,TOGA,SESS,MIROKU AND KAGOME)....HOPE KAGS AND SESS MOM GET ALONG GREAT....WHERE ARE SHIPPO, RIN, AND KILALA .....AND CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG BUT HAS SANGO BECOME INUYASHA'S CONCUBINE....I'M GETTING THE IMPRESSION THAT SOMETHING LIKE THAT IS GOING ON... IF THATS THE CASE THEN...DAMN. I'M EXPECTING KAGOME TO CALL HER OUT ON HER WHORING WAYS... I HOPE KAGS REALLY TELLS HER OFF, LETTING HER HAVE IT BIGTIME AND SHAMING SANGO BIG TIME IN FRONT OF ALL OF INUYASHA'S FAMILY AND NATSU AND HIS FATHER.....IT WOULD SERVE SANGO RIGHT FOR BEING A NASTY HO!!!!  I DON'T THINK KAGS WOULD BACK DOWN FROM HAVING IT OUT WITH HER EVEN IF SHE DID CONSIDER HER A FRIEND AT ONE TIME....I DON'T THINK KAGS WILL HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH HER AFTER WHAT SHE DID TO MIROKU,ESPECIALLY IF SHE HAS BECOME INUYASHA'S CONCUBINE....IF I WAS KAGS I WOULDN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH INUYASHA EITHER AFTER HOW HE AND KIKYO BEHAVED AND TREATED HER BEFORE SHE LEFT.....I WOULD IGNORE THEM LIKE THEY WERE INSIGNIFICANT INSECTS...UNLESS THEY PISS HER OFF...THEN I'LL SIT BACK AND WATCH THE SHIT HIT THE FAN,SO TO SPEAK...LOL..................................................................PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON!!!!!!!...............................TDAN


Kagomereborn (Chapter 20) - Wed 25 Mar 2020

Hey there . I'm new to your story but I wanted to leave a comment . I waited until I had gotten through all the chapters. Overall I think your character  development and pace is fine. I don't write fanfics anymore however I can relate with trying to find your groove. with each story it will come at different times. Also like your no cannon character  additions.  You could probably if you wanted lean into some side arcs to chapters to develop the backstories even more depending on what you goal is for this body of work. Since you are asking for critiques  , I do think there are some spots of redundancy or over explaination might be a better way to put it that you could condense .  For example you might not explain a thought in 3rd person then have the character think it verbatim and then say  aloud.  hope that makes sense . If you have some time while we are all trying to do this sheltering in place go back over the chapters and possibly what I'm saying will be clearer. :) looking forward to your next installment.


Jennifer (Chapter 20) - Mon 23 Mar 2020

I think the pace is great! Keep up the great work! Maybe update several chapters at once, lol, so we have something great to read during lock down. 


Shanika (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Mar 2020

It's dragging...


GomeMaru (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Mar 2020

I believe the story is going at a great pace, Not to fast not to slow.  It feels like reading a novel, keep up the good work.


Kitty (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Mar 2020
I think it’s going at the right pace. Though if they did interview some people, you could speed it up since they had to tell the truth. That could be a place to speed up since they couldn’t lie about their intentions. But I think this story is great and that it’s on the right track.

KEdakumi (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Mar 2020

It is a good story.  I think it could pick up a little bit... but it isn't bad if you keep the same pace either.  You really aren't repeating yourself, and that's my biggest pet peeve personally with some stories.

 Can't wait to see where you take it


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Mar 2020

Nice chapter.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Sun 16 Feb 2020

Great chapter, Happy Birthday To Me!


tdan (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Feb 2020

HI, I LIKE YOUR FANFIC....HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE OFTEN....LOOKIN FORWARD TO SEEING KAGOME WHIP KIKYOS BUTT INTO THE DEEPEST PIT OF HELL ALONG WITH WHOEVER ELSE IS TRYING TO KILL KAGOME TO JOIN NARAKU....I HOPE SESS FALLS IN LOVE WITH KAGS AND DECIDES TO GIVE UP BEING A BACHELOR. WHEN ARE WE GOING TO FIND OUT WHAT THE CONNECTION BETWEEN KAGS AND NATSU. WHO WAS NATSU FATHER TALKING ABOUT WHEN HE SAID KAGOME LOOKS LIKE HER....WHO IS HER .....IS HE TALKING ABOUT NATSU'S SISTER THAT DISSAPPEARED ,THE PRINCESS MIDORIKO TOLD KAGOME TO FIND ..............................................................................................................TDAN


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 18) - Thu 02 Jan 2020

All seven chapters are good,  Happy New Year!


teresa daniel (Chapter 17) - Sun 29 Sep 2019

HI, LOVE THE STORY....PLEASE UPDATE OFTEN....LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE....HOW MANY CHAPTERS DO YOU THINK THE FANFIC WILL HAVE....WILL TOUGA GET BACK TOGETHER WITH HIS EX-MATE , SESSHOUMARU'S MOTHER....CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HIS MOM THINKS OF KAGOME.... I HOPE THEY GET ALONG.... CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT THE OTHER LORDS , LADIES AND OTHER POTENTIAL MATES TAKE HAVING A POWERFUL MIKO IN THE CASTLE....HOPE KAGS IS SUPER POWERFUL.... LOVE A STRONG,POWERFUL,INDEPENDANT,CONFIDENT,INTELLIGENT, KAGOME....THIS IS THE BEST TYPE OF KAGOME ....CAN'T STAND A WEEK,WINNY,DEPENDANT , KAGOME WHO ALLOWS SOME ONE TO USE HER , OR LET'S OTHERS RUN OVER HER...ALSO BY NOW KAGOME WOULD KNOW HOW TO DO..... OFUDA'S , SUTRA'S , KOTODAMA NECKLACES LIKE THE ONE INUYASHA WEARS , HOW TO THROW POWERBALLS OF REIKI WITH HER HANDS , HOW TO MAKE TREES/PLANTS GROW LIKE KIKYO DID , HOW TO HEAL USING HER POWER , MAKE DIFFERENT TYPES BARRIERS LIKE KIKYO DID , SHE EVEN HAD AN INVISIBLE BARRIER SO PEOPLE COULDN'T FIND HER , CAST SPELLS AND DO ENCHANTMENTS INSTANTLY , AND SHE SHOULD USE MULTIPLE WEAPONS LIKE MIDORIKO , AND DON'T FORGET SHE IS SUPPOSE TO BE IMMORTAL , TIMELESS , TIME DOES NOT TOUCH HER AT LEAST THAT'S WHAT KAGUYA SAID... THATS WHY SHE WANTED TO EAT KAGOME TO STEAL HER POWER OF IMMORTALITY , .................ANYWAY I HOPE YOU UPDATE REAL SOON.................................................................................TDAN


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 17) - Wed 25 Sep 2019

Interesting  how is the increase  is sexual desire going to effect Kagome and if Touga is with her all the time him and how will Sesshomaru  react to that cause I will be honest I want Sesshy Lags lemons XD


teresa daniel (Chapter 17) - Tue 24 Sep 2019

HP , I LIKE    '' THE TRUTH AND THE LIES  ''  SO FAR IT'S BEEN INTERESTING,,,,I WOULD LIKE TO SEE KAGS GET HER IMPATH POWERS POLISHED TO PERFECTION AND TO GET THE REST OF HER SOUL BACK FROM KIKYO, KILLING KIKYO IN THE PROCESS . I ALSO WOULD LIKE TO SEE INUTAISHO TRAIN HER IN MULTIPLE WEAPONS,,,, SWORDS,SAISTHROWING DAGGERS, FANS,STARS,AND POSSIBLY OTHERS,,,,MARTIAL ARTS,,,AND SPELL CASTING IF SHE HASN'T ALREADY . I HOPE SHE GETS HER SOUL BACK FIRST,,,,THEN FINDS THE NORTHERN PRINCESS,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,TDAN


yuuki kuran (Chapter 16) - Mon 02 Sep 2019

Love the story keep up the great work ?


tdan (Chapter 15) - Wed 31 Jul 2019

HI, I LOVE THIS FANFIC ....BUT I WISH YOU WOULD MAKE LONGER CHAPTERS OR UPDATE MORE OFTEN....IS SANGO INUYASHA'S WHORE NOW OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT.... IT SEEMS YOU MAY BE HINTING TO THE FACT THAT SHE MAY BE HIS WHORE,CONCUBINE,MISTRESS OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT......I ALSO GET THE FEELING THAT KAGOME IS MUCH MORE THAN SHE SEEMS....AND THAT SHE LOOKS FAR TO MUCH AND ACTS TO SIMILAR TO NATSU TO NOT BE RELATED TO HIM....IS SHE THIS MISSING PRINCESS TWIN SISTER OF HIS...THE MISSING TWIN SISTER OF THE NORTH .....SHE MUST BE OTHER WISE WHY WOULD HE GO TO THE FUTURE TO TRAIN HER . HOW IS INUNOTAISHO AND THE FAMILY GOING TO REPAY KAGOME FOR BRINGING INUTAISHO BACK TO LIFE AND FOR DEFEATING NARAKU AND GETTING RID OF THE JEWEL.AND HOW WILL YOUKAI KIND REPAY HER FOR HELPING THEM MAKE TO THE FUTURE...WHEN THEY WERE TO HAVE BEEN WIPED OUT ..PROBABLY BY WAR WITH MIKO'S AND MONK'S...............................................TDAN


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 14) - Tue 28 May 2019

Oh yes I almost forgot about this fic please keep going


teresa daniel (Chapter 12) - Sun 03 Mar 2019

HI, I LOVE THE FANFIC YOU WROTE SO FAR ..... '' THE TRUTH AND THE LIES ''  IS GOING GREAT SO FAR AND I HAVE READ IT SEVERAL TIMES.......I WAS WONDERING WHEN YOU WERE GOING TO UPDATE.....I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON...I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE CHAPTERS.... CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN WHEN THEY GET BACK.... I WONDER IF KAGOME WILL GET HER SOUL PIECE BACK FROM KIKYO RIGHT AWAY ....SHE SHOULD BEFORE KIKYO TAINTS HER SOUL MORE....IF I WAS KAGOME I WOULD SNATCH IT BACK AS SOON AS I SEE KIKYO AND I WOULD DO IT PAINFULLY AS POSSIBLY.......KIKYO DESERVES IT....... WHEN KIKYO WAS MADE ALIVE AGAIN I HOPE SHE WAS NOT RESURRECTED WITH MIKO POWERS .  KAMI SHOULD TAKE HER POWERS AND MAKE HER A NORMAL HUMAN LIKE SHE WANTED TO BE  BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T DESERVE TO HAVE ANY POWERS AFTER HER FAILED MISSION IN HER FORMER LIFE .....AND BECAUSE  SHE DID SO MANY THINGS WRONG TO KAGOME WHO COMPLETED HER MISSION WITH THE SHIKON JEWEL, LIKE BETRAYING HER TO NARAKU BY TAKING KAGS SHARDS IN THE BEGINNING AND ALL THE TIMES SHE TRIED TO KILL KAGOME, EVEN AFTER KAGOME HEALED HER THAT TIME AFTER NARAKU POISONED HER....KAGS DID NOT HAVE TO HEAL HER..... KAGS SHOULD NOT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT KIKYO AS WELL AS EVERYTHING ELSE .   INUYASHA SHOULD ALSO BE PUNISHED FOR HIS BETRAYAL TO KAGOME AND HIS TREATMENT OF HER..... AND FOR TRYING TO ATTACK KAGOME BEFORE SHE LEFT. SO KAGOME SHOULD COME UP WITH A GOOD PUNISHMENT MAYBE KAMI CAN GIVE KAGOME THE POWER TO TAKE OTHER PEOPLES  POWERS AWAY  EITHER BY A SPECIAL ABILITY FROM KAMI OR THE JEWEL.... OR A   ( TOUCH AND A SPECIAL THOUGHT SHORT PRAYER TO KAMI ).   IT WOULD COME IN HANDY IN THE FUTURE DEALING WITH WHO  EVER IS KILLING OFF THE YOUKAI AND HELPING HER TO HELP YOUKAI MAKE IT TO THE FUTURE......................TDAN


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 12) - Tue 05 Feb 2019

Please update soon


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