This is a wonderful story, I love how you have portrayed the characters. There are a few typos, but overall your story has a very good flow. I can't wait to see what she does when she leaves. I hope you update soon!
HI, I LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR....LIKE HOW YOU HAVE HANDLED INUYASHA AND KIKYO SO FAR....I HOPE YOU MAKE THEM SUFFER REAL GOOD FOR THE WAY THEY HAVE TREATED KAGOME....INU NEEDS TO PAY FOR BETRAYING KAGS AND HER FAMILY....HE PROMISED THEM HE WOULD PROTECT HER...HE HAS NOT...HE HAS HURT HER MORE THAN ANYONE....AND KIKYO I NEVER BELIEVED KAGS WAS HER REINCARNATION....I BELIEVE SHE IS MIDORIKO'S IF ANYONES....THE JEWEL WAS CREATED BY MIDORIKO ...AND KAGS WAS BORN WITH THE JEWEL IN HER...MIDORIKO WAS THE MOST POWERFUL MIKO EVER ...AND LITTLE IS KNOWN OF HER FAMILY....SHE CAME TO THE SLAYER VILLAGE WHERE SHE LIVED....BUT SHE WAS NOT FROM THAT VILLAGE ...SHE HAD NO KNOWN FAMILY....BUT I BELIEVE KAGS IS HER REINCARNATION...OR AT LEAST HER DESCENDANT.SHE EVEN LOOKS MORE LIKE MIDORIKO THAN SHE DOES KIKYO...........................I DO HOPE YOU INTEND TO UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY THAN ONCE TIME A MONTH.....PERHAPS YOU MIGHT BE WILLING TO UPDATE ONCE A WEEK..................................TDANIEL
Great story so far. I love how your building up to everything and taking it slowly with sesshomaru, natsu and fubuki. Who will train kagome in her time?
Update soon onegai
Oh no, you leave a bomb shell of a cliffie and say you will update in about a month...you are such a meanie (pouting) lol :)
Kikyo and Inuyasha are a piece work and el stupido as a rock. No brains or none to speak of anyway. Loved Kagome's theatical grand entrance...
it was funny as hell. I like the direction this story is headed to. Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent job!
This is a very nice story. I like to see Kikyo and Inuyasha get taken down from their filthy high horse. Is the author of this story playing the part of Fubuki?
Nicely written and your writing style is on top. Looking forward to future chapters. Excellent job!
Great update looking forward to seeing more.
This story is coming along beautifully. I hope there well be more updates in the future.
Loving this story looking forward to reading more. Great story
All I gotta say "Yay" this is so good and I hope you keep updating and soon because I am so excited and looking forward to what happens next. You started this great an do am loving it especially the hate kikyo is getting and inuyasha. This will be awesome I just know it. Please keep up the fantastic work.