Whoa... I wasn't sure where the story was heading, but nice job! Kept me guessing! Please write more! :) I really enjoy your work!

Well you did it I cried twice during this it was so good!

Aww. That was sad and it seemed like it was a never ending cycle until the very end.  Poor Kagome.  Makes me wonder how Sesshou felt, what his thoughts were throughout the whole thing.

I really liked the tone of the story. the snippets are an interesting way to tell the story and yet it flows nicely. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

Le sigh...I love this.

Men this wasn't a dark fic but it was slightly depressing. Great character portrayal though

So kagome loves inuyasha but lush after sesshomaru. .