Hmmm, i think sandy should die...and Sesshoumaru should kill her cruelly!!....but why didnt sessho beast react and go crazy??? Ugghh so many questions. His beast only surfaced that one time ...can we get some lemons to! Lol
A truly unique story. I don't think I've seen a story about a Sess/Kag pairing written such as this plot. I love it!
Chapter 2 moved very quickly in comparison to Chapter 1. Chapter 1 was fluid and could be followed for the time-jumps. Unfortunately Chapter 2 had so many time jumps, that it made it a bit difficult to follow along. I didn't feel it was "rushed" as another reviewer indicated, but more that the story wasn't expanded as much as it could have been. But since it is Chapter 2, I get the feeling it is still more along the lines of a continued prologue leading up to the actual story that will begin with the next chapter you will post.
I look forward to reading more of the story as you post it! :) Keep up the great writing!
Toni (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 Dec 2016
Omg. How could you kill her off!!!!
What a twist. Kind of wonder if his grandfather didn't have something to do with the shooting. I also wonder if he won't give in and end up mating somebody else.
I am falling in love with this story so far. I love their OOCness, it fits them perfectly. The families seem to love each other also. Sessho and Kagome truly love each other because it seems like they would take a bullet for each other...a ride and die together relationship.
I think that they will eventually consummate that mating and if they have any children they will be powerful full bred pups. If Sessho's grandfather lives long enough to see that, he will be shocked and probably elated, then he can die in peace knowing that the bloodline will not die out like he thinks. I would think that would be the icing on the cake with a cherry on top unless you already have your story already written out that is. Anyway just an idea. lol
This chapter is very nicely written. I am looking forward to future updates soon. (btw when did Kagome get such a potty mouth?) lol :)
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Thu 29 Dec 2016
Only one word... Confusing... And it seems rushed.. but this is only my opinion. Also as one for honour and public facade and respectable image to cheat so much? I know about the understanding yada yada but it still too much. And the second part of chapter was really rushed and confusing. What glass case? What plan? One minute it seems like she is dead then not... Anyway thx for updating! Happy holidays!
But i hope they will soon falling in love and make a lot of babies
Very interesting start. Feels a little OOC, but it works. Can't wait to see where this goes.
I loved it they have true love
Amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Dec 2016
Amazing beginning! I absolutely love this first chapter and I already know I will love your story. Can't wait to see what happens next. The beast sudden but short coming out gives hints....right? : D Thank you so much!
Pretty interesting! I'd love to see where this goes :)
Love it!!! Getting added to my favorites!
Hmm interesting so far
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