Beautifuly written, love the somber tone and how it ends with that ray of hope. LOVE it! Would love to read a follow up if you are so inspired. :D
Really enjoyed this short but sweet story! I liked the different point of views, and how they healed each other. Good read!
I really like what you have done with his little one shot. The mixture of longing for the past and making the most of the present is a realistic portrayal of how Kagome might feel. That they decide to move forward together is a good way to end it.
I love the way you wrote this. Just enough detail from each of their point of view . And ended up with just a touch of bittersweet happiness.
Nicely written one shot. It was kind of bittersweet. It started out sad but ended up sweet. I really liked this chapter. Wonderful job!