Not bad was liking it, but for a one shot it doesn't seem finished. Nothing got resolved really. They just kind of bullied Kagome into going with them. She hates Sesshoumaru and his son fears him. Makes me wonder how it was going to work out in the end or was she just going to deal with it and be miserable while Sesshoumaru thought about the past he forgot about when he had enjoyed being with her?

really liked it  too bad it's a one shot

Sesshoumaru is always spouting about how strong and in control he has over himself. It sounded like his control was slipping from him while he was Kagome in college. His beast chose Kagome to be their mate but Sessho refused the beast because it sounded like the beast wanted to break her and abuse her probably for not submitting. That was seven years ago when Kagome had ambition and plans for her life until Asahiro came along. Now seven years can change people and circumstances can change. Sessho should have learned self control, he claimed he loved Kagome very much but he totally forgot her when searching for his heir. Some kind of love.

I don't like the way it ended but it was a vey nicely written one shot. Maybe one day you may change your mind and expand on this story.

Hi I liked the story where it was going but it was too short and had an ubrupt ending didn't feel finished. In a way you let sesshomaru win after what he did. Expected more though,but good writing. Merry Christmas 

Oh! How heartbreaking and horrifying!

I can't say the end satisfied me... You and your love for dark and tragic dramatical things... Sighs... It was beautiful but it ruined my mood and exactly for Christmas! You are cruel! Thx for writing! Merry Christmas!