This would make a great full-length story. Like telling what happened to her, how she came to be Sesshomaru's mate and how she reacts after she gains her memories. It would make a lot more sense if you gave more details. You left it open for so much more. There is nno closer for this story. just unanswered questions.

iiii!!! love it!

I'm glad you enjoy the story. At the moment, I don't plan on making it more. Unless, it whacks me in the head. Always a possibility. I am happy that you want more. ???? 

This was a very nice little story. It is too bad you cannot expand on it. I think it was nicely written only a couple of minor errors but no biggy...it did not take anything away from the story. I enjoyed reading it. I see on your profile that there is another story you wrote so I'm off to read that one. lol

That was a charming little oneshot! Thanks for posting, hope to see more from you soon :)

Now that was cute.  Adorable in its own way.  ^^ I rather enjoyed it.