Shiro_ryuu (Chapter 14) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

Well, Sesshomaru may as well get any challenge out of the way early on, instead of waiting for later whenit could bite him in the ass somehow. Definitely suspecting Kikyo's direct involvement in Inuyasha's behavior though.

sailorv (Chapter 14) - Fri 02 Jun 2017

It's a lovely story.  I lok foward to every update.  :)

Mona (Chapter 12) - Thu 01 Jun 2017

I bet Kikyo did something to him, that's we she remains constantly close by. 

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Tue 30 May 2017

This was an interesting chapter. I have not reviewed since chapter five but I still have been keeping up with the story. 

Now, some more Inu bashing...Kagome is being too tolerant of Inuyasha's behavior. I know it's her nature but enough is enough, she needs to step up to the plate and really kick his ass to the curb. Why is he pretending that he is in charge when he cares nothing for his pack.  Kagome just needs to challenge him and take over but she won't do it. She lets him have his way while everyone else including herself are suffering. The pig steals and eats up most of the food, leaves his pack unprotected while he goes off to screw some dirt and comes back yelling; was it not a good enough lay. He makes me want to This shows you are a good author if I get so worked up over a fanfiction

Keep up the good writing. Looking forward to more chapters. Great job on chapters six thru 10!!!

Ree-san (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 May 2017

That was a little disappointing. She went through all that for them all to act as if nothing happened? Little confused on that. 

Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 May 2017

just finished reading this on ff  great story  you should post all the chapters here also  

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 May 2017

I came across your story and it is so intriguing and fascinating. It is nicely written also.

I know these are characters in fanfiction land but Inuyasha is such a pain in the ass. Sometimes it feels like he is a real person that you want to just jack up. LoL I could never understand why Kagome would want to stay friends with him promise or no, I would kick him to the curve. It seems like she is a gluten for pain. Inuyasha is an egostical, self-centered, lieing, cheating and so much more pig. With him being around Kikyo and having sex with her... he never washes up afterwards so he has got to smell bad and Kagome wants to love that. Well enough of Inu bashing for now.

Looking forward to more chapters (and maybe a little bit longer :) ) Love your story!

roberta. (Chapter 2) - Fri 16 Dec 2016

Just found your story looks good hoping to read more.

princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Fri 16 Dec 2016

Very good story. Inuyasha isn't too good at covering things up,especially if he doesn't see it as a problem. Inuyasha didn't eat even though he's older and doesn't need to eat as often. I think he took the last ramen cup/s because he'd make sure he got what he wanted to eat.


Will sesshomaru help out the inutachi in some way? How will kagome get stronger and who will teach her?


Update soon onegai 


Ja ne

Violla (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Dec 2016

Un bel inizio ,  Non vedo l'ora per vedere come la storia prosegue . 

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