Thx for the update! It cleared things a bit!   Also Rin is different yes but in a way that is new. Will wait for the next chapter!

Awesome...  I hope you can update again soon.

I still have hope for your story but it has become somewhat discombobulated. How old is Rin suppose to be now? She acts older but Kagome keeps referring to her as still a child. Also Rin is acting out of character. She acts like she has never seen death and destruction. She has seen Sessho in his element and now she gets upset when Kagome starts to tell her how she and Sessho met. When Kagome starts to tell her story, she lets things get her off track and then she begins to ramble about confusing things. How old is Kagome suppose to be? She refers to herself as 'old' but yet she acts and talks child-like...no maturity as an adult. I think you need to tell us the back story leading up to where she is now. I believe it will help to understand the story better.

Your writing with minimum to no spelling errors and other matters seem to be okay. I will be looking for updates because I do like your story idea.

The idea has merit but it needs more work in my opinion. It's too confusing and the way kagome behaves... Hmmmm it looks like she is a confused child not a mature female. I understand that maybe she has no hope or other but also we need to see the story before. How and why she is like this. It's like going in circles and nothing is clear. Will wait for more like I said the idea is interesting. Good luck and take care!

Epic.

It would be nice if you could give a back history of Kagome's predicament and the rest of the group. Is Kagome still mortal or is she immortal now. I like your story. It is interesting. Looking forward to more chapters. Good job.