I love this story I like that you take time with the build up but don't take to long.
It's hard to believe that you took a 7 year hiatus, the writing flows so smoothly from your edited chapters to your new one. I read this story forthe first time today and yesterday, but I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to see how the plot progresses. I look forward to more updates :)
I don't blame her for not going. She did not give herself enough time to heal and truly determine if she wants to be with him. I think she should have removed herself from the situation longer instead of giving in so soon. She is clearly traumatized from his treatment of her and is not really being fair to herself or him. What if she heals and cannot be around him or realizes she can never really trust him or is subconsiously afraid of him striking her again. I think her waivering back and forth speaks volumes. You did a great job communicating her confusion and emotional unrest. Looking forward to more!
candy (Chapter 16) - Wed 12 Oct 2016
Poor sesshomaru I think he needs to be more romantic with her. And open up more to her. Like talking about his younger days and get her to talk about herself. Need to rebuild trust. I really like this story.
I am very excited for the new chapter as this was a story I really liked. I like that Kagome walked away from him and his drama. In too many stories she puts up with too much emotional abuse in my opinion. I am curious to see how Sesshoumaru handles her absence and if he truly accepts that he has feelings for her.
This is one of the best stories I've found!
iin (Chapter 6) - Fri 07 Oct 2016
this story was one of my fav story...thank for your decision to continue...
Mona (Chapter 6) - Sun 02 Oct 2016
Where is Shippo? How can Kagome leave him behind and not think about him?
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