VS (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Aug 2018

Hello,

since I adore Shippo I had to read this one shot after seeing the title. And you didn't disappoint! I love the relationship you portray between Shippo and Kagome! She would do anything for her little boy.

I hate how Inuyasha treated her! Such an ass! And he was even thinking about harming Shippo :( I hope Kagome didn't only run away but called the police too ... otherwise he would be left unpunished and would do the same to another woman too!

But now she has Sesshomaru - and he is for sure the better option ;)

Your one shot is really sweet and I enjoyed reading it! There is only one suggestion I would like to make: you should reread this work. There were quite a few mistakes. Like f.e. you wanted to say "dad" but wrote "day" or somewhere you wanted to say "eyes" and actually wrote "hair"... otherwise a nice story! Well done!!!


Sayuri (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

it's quite of a fast story, but also a cute one! <3


cassandra (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Sep 2016

Kinda short but I liked it


Ashlyn Braere (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Sep 2016

I recognized the song in the story.  It's one of my favorites and you did it justice.  Well done.  :)


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