So far, this has been delightful. I'm enjoying the read.
I love this story. It is nicely written but there are a lot of misspelling of words or typos. I understand if you are from another country. I see how you spell words like center as centre because British english spell words differently from American english and I know it is not a misspell or a typo. But some of your words are just plain misspells. You are doing a fantastic job on your storytelling.
I was beginning to like Inuyasha but if he has to go he has to go. Sessho sent him to get Miroku, maybe he might get killed on the way back or he gets a bullet through the heart trying to protect Kagome or something. It seems awfully convient that Tensaiga gets damaged and Sessho will not be able to revive him.
Looking forward to future chapters. Excellent job!
Marie (Chapter 10) - Fri 06 Jan 2017
Oh i like it, i like you inuyasha but adios. Come on sesshy-ness! Cant wait for the next chapter
Poor Sessy! Lusting over Kagome already! What will Inuyasha think? Ha ha! Love this story sooo much! Thanks for the updates!!!! Just be careful of the mispells though! Thanks again!
I am always ready for InuYasha to kick the bucket (unless he's with Kikiyo, then I couldn't care less, lol).
But he is truly endearing her and so mature:). though it's a good set up, many don't have Sessh kill him directly? Like, maybe they are in battle and he just doesn't protect him from an attack he sees coming. Idk, I just think it would be a little TOO much demon culture for a pregnant human miko from the future to handle if she starts developing feelings for her mate's brother who intentionally killEd him. Ya know?
also, wow! These chapters are coming so quickly!! LOVE IT! Keep all the awesomeness coming! ????
THIS was a great chapter!! I absolutely loved the scene with InuKimi! Kagome handled herself well and I'm excited to see how she continues to change those around her and endear them to her:)... Especially our dear Sesshomaru!
Guns in Japan... already?! And so it has begun. Sad but hopefully this is one area of history Kags can help rewrite without too many horroble consequences in the future!
Nala (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jan 2017
AMAZING STORY KEEP UP THE FANTASTIC Work!
Violla (Chapter 10) - Thu 05 Jan 2017
Molto bello.
Can't wait to see what happens next
I really do hope ladykimi still has a back bone and doesnt get super mushy ugh ...yes off inuyash already but i guess in a good way..kinda????..come on bring on more Sesshoumaru hope he doesnt get super mushy either! I need so leeemmooonnsssss lol fruit category is good lmao
Violla (Chapter 9) - Wed 04 Jan 2017
Kagome può aiutare con la conoscenza delle pistole e fare vedere a tutti Che li può aiutare, al prossimo capitolo.
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