This is an interesting concept, is Kagome a demigod? Or just a powerful miko? Mmm

I hope she is the first, would be interesting since most myths and legends have pretty exciting and often harsh quests for the demigod in question.

great job so far. :)

Please Please continue this story. I really like it! Great writing, keep it up. :)

This story is very interesting and mildly horrifying. I like the way you're weaving Inuyasha's story and Naraku'so existence in with the plot. That you have filled in the gaps with Sesshomaru regaining control of the West and getting his family situated.

I really want to know who Kagome's father was. This Nagi... Was he known to the youkai? Where is he?

Looking forward to more.

~Animefreak242

aka

Kawaii Girl

This was a very interesting chapter, blood and guts galore. Nicely written and graphic, you did a wonderful job in the description area.

When I was reading chapter 3, you had described Sessho as being almost or at least six feet tall. I would imagine most Japanese people would be a bit on the short side and that would be tall to them but Sessho being a youkai and a Daiyoukai at that I would expect him to be more intimindating at seven feet. I would imagine that the most powerful Daiyoukai especially the inuyoukai would be very tall. Six feet to me is short as compared to a man that is six feet and 5 or 6 inches tall. I had an uncle that was close to seven feet tall. He was six feet and 10 inches tall and he was very intimindating and he worked out. Unfortunately he died in a tragic accident when I was 18 years old. So in my mind this is how I picture Sessho. I can't picture him as anything other height. Besides I love tall men (wink...wink).  :)

How old was Inuyasha when Sessho went looking for him and found him to bring him into the pack? Does this mean that him and his mother are accepting of him now and or are there any harsh feelings lurking between the three of them still?

If Noritaka and Naraku are perhaps looking for Kagome, how would they know of her existance and what would so special about her? So many questions but so little answers, I guess I have keep reading to find out which I intended to do anyway.

Looking forward to future chapters and I get very excited when you post them...I wish they were longer but I will take what I can get. Lol

what happens next?

Holy smokes! What a gruesome war. For the content of this chapter you wrote it exceptionally well. I actually felt like I was there with kagome and inuyasha. I cant wait for the next chapter!

Can't wait for more!! ~

"A woman"

It's about to get real. I am so ready for this!

Great stuff you got going on! Can't wait for more to come. Hopefully quickly :) I'm hanging on the edge of my seat! 

Love this~ Can't wait for more. I can tell this is going to be such an epic story!!! Can't wait to read what happens next! <3 

This is so adorible I can't wait to see where it goes!

I really like this story. It is intriguing and fascinating thus far. Since it was not mentioned in chapter one, Kagome's real father must still be alive somewhere. Did he know of Naoko's pregnancy? She described him as being otherworldly, could he be a god or demi-god? If so, then I take it that Kagome will grow to become a powerful being or miko. Hopefully she will eventually learn of her true heritage and avenge her clan's massecre and re-establish the Higurashi name.

Very nicely written. Keep up the excellent job. I will be looking forward to future chapters.

Omg. I can feel an epic story coming on. Lovely first chapter. It leaves me with so many questions! Can't wait for the next update.

Oh No! I'm totslly entranced with this fic already and it's just begun. I look forward to seeing where you take this and I thank you for sharing your writing.

Good, but there are odd uses for certain words, and missing punctuation.  The first oddity is likely the use of 'worn' in the sentence: Rough hands worn from many battles.  Using calloused would have been better instead of worn, as to have callouses on a man's hands means he has rough hands, a worker's hands, or in this case a soldier's hands.  

The second oddity is the use of the word 'chest armour' instead of something specific like breastplate, cuirass, or something else like a shirt of mail or scale mail.   Chest armour could be anything from a frying pan strapped to a person's chest to a plate slipped in under a jerkin or a vest.

A good start.