Looking forward to step dad leaving

Great story! Your characters are very alive and present. Whether good or bad, I can imagine this being someones life. Looking forward to more updates. 

I just wanted to say I love you story and, b/c i love storylines with these themes; how you combinedible realistic scenarios with fanfiction is amazing. I can't wait to read this story all the way to end and see how the relationships between all the primary characters as well as Kagome and Sesshomaru pan out.I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

I'm curious how many more chapters we have to go before the story becomes your own.  I look forward to reading more.

My god this story already has me hooked. I can't wait for another chapter.

I love this story. I felt that your characters are well rounded,  and I really enjoy your impression of sesshomaru. I thought it was vague that moment before kagome followed inuyasha bit perhaps that was intended and will be explained. I would like to see sesshomaru's and inuyasha's reaction to kagome's abuse and bruises,  I'm always a fan of a protective sesshomaru. I'm so excited for the next chapter! 

Contrary to popular belief you can be poor and not be skinny Philosophy Blue. I am grew up pretty damn poor myself. My family living paycheck to paycheck. Sometimes I opted to skip meals to make sure my younger brothers were full. Even giving our situation my mother and I both have managed to still have outstanding curves. Well my boobs and tummy are tiny and my hips and buns are voluptuous.

But thank you for your review my dear.

Kisses

Sakura

Ah, this  time-old cliche... A girl is incredibly poor and has to work all the time and never gets enough for to eat, BUT she has beautiful curves and looks gorgeous without makeup. Also she is an absolute angel. Sadly, that's not how things work... If Kagome really were that poor, she would not have curves she'd be unhealthily skinny and her complexion would not be so nice. 

Aside from that, which isn't a too big part in the story, I think you're doing fine and paying good attention to grammar and punctuation, etc. Keep writing, just start a little realistic...

Cheers,

Philosophy Blue

Yes Sarah I got this story from Literotica. The author didn't finish the story. It took 9 momths for the original author to respond to my continuous messages but she finally did. She gave me permission to have her story a few months ago because she lost her muse and doesn't have the time to finish the story.

I am intrigued. 

Omg! I hope he tears her father likb from limb when he sees her bruises! Oh and I like Inu's character, I can see him and Gome being fast friends and it driving Sess mad lol

Love the concept and dialogue so far! Looking forward to future updates. 

This Story is freakin awesome and it's only the first chapter!!! I'm totally in love and waiting for the next chapter!!! You're off to a very good start. Keep going! 

i love when sesshomaru so obsessed with kagome. . it's screaming dangerous situation ! like it

Good start. Excited for the next chapter !!!!