I would love to see this story continued further.
It was exceptionally well written.... All the emotions are in the right place, you see yourself involved in the story, feel part of it. Rhys how good of a writer you are.
Hope you would do a sequel to this magnificent story....
I would love to continue reading your work for this fic.
Selazul (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Nov 2015
Oh that was quite lovely! I wish there was more to it :( Alas I am never satisfied.
nia (Chapter 1) - Fri 25 Apr 2014
i loved the story. but, still.. :<
i wish it'll have sequel... \>,</
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Sep 2013
wow...this was quite the oneshot. It had so much emotion and feeling in it. I think it would have been interesting as a chapter story, where you could drag things out even further. There was so much to this and it was wonderfully done. I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)
misty (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Aug 2009
| That was sooooo great new and different, I loved it!!!!
Rikayu (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 May 2009
| I love it. Very well written. I wish it was continued though. :)
jojo661538 (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 May 2009
| it wont be rape right or will it that would be fudge up to be viciously murdered and then raped after death hey will he go to the future and tell her mother of the tragedy that occured you know what i think would be so funny that if because of what happended and their bond he has multipersonality disorder he has more than one personality kagomes his and a mixture of them both i bet that would scare the heck out of his people anyhow keep up the great work it has me hooked already ^_^
| This was so heart-wrenching, but in the end the story came out alright. Again, I must say you have a talent for creating emotions that flow from the pages.
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