Non vedo l'ora per un nuovo aggiornamento. 

Oh poor kit. Can't wait til he finds her.

The build up for this is so good.  Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Ooh, interesting.   Hooked so far.

The story is strong just to cryptic not enough I don't know meat? Still well written.

This is amazing. I definitely would like to read more. Keep it up. 

Oh this is getting good.  Such a unique start.  Can't wait to see what happens when they hit land and hear more of their back story. 

Interessante  vediamo  i prossimi  capitoli, aggiorni presto. 

Caught my attention looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

I'm confused...hopefully the next chapter will smooth it out?