Like the story

Really enjoying it keep up the good work

Please keep going with your story. I've been reading it since you started it. As for the flashback it could be helpful in discovering why there are so many secrets and provide a bit of background for sesshomaru as well as the others.

But how would the flashback take place? Usually someone who's been there must be remembering something. Could keitaro provide this memory? If you decide to reveal it during the plot, which of them will be willing to tell kagome all that they know or will she over hear pieces of conversations that help her piece together the past? Is there a portrait of yumi?

Update soon onegai

Ja ne

HI,LOVE THE STORY AND PLOT-LINE SO FAR.....EITHER FLASHBACK OR REVEAL THROUGH PLOT ...EITHER SOUNDS FINE, BUT IT MIGHT HELP SOME TO SEE THE ACTUAL HAPPENINGS BETTER THROUGH FLASHBACK.....KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK HOPE YOU  UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON....................................TDANIEL

Very nice.  Hoping for more. 

I'm so glad you continued writing!  I've been waiting forever for a story update! 

Love it so Farr look forward to reading more ????

I'm so glad you continued writing!  I've been waiting forever for a story update! 

Love it so Farr look forward to reading more ????

I love this story. It is well written and well conceived. Please keep this story going until the end.

I like this story you have a unique plot going I would like to see more please

Dont you dare abandon it!

Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

no, don’t let it die off! someone cares! more than someone’s. aside from grammatical mistakes, it’s a good story. it makes me wonder, though, is kagome a reincarnation of yumi? but then what would that make kikyo? was kagome not the reincarnation of kikyo? or is kagome a reincarnation of both? merged souls? can’t wait to find out! :)

I still care and can not, will not stop caring for this story !!!!!!!!! Please don't let this story fall into the abyss of lost fan fictions :,(

i reaaly really really love your story <3 I've read every single chapter and am captivated with it all!!!!!

^^ thanks for starting this story!!!!

I'm so glad this story is back,  I'm looking forward to see where you go with this and see the development of the characters 

Fun I like it I hope you continue. I think Kagome is a reincarnation  of Seshoumaru's child hood sweet heart. Which is kinda disappointing. I want him to want Kagome for herself.

OH MY GOSH! I stumbled upon this fanfiction and am now absolutly in love! Aside from the few minor grammatical errors this story is amazing! keep writing I would like to see where this one ends up.

Please continue to write your story.  I want to know more about Sesshomaru and Kagome.

In my previous review, I mentioned that you may consider getting a beta, well I was thinking about the previous chapters when I wrote that.

I hope I did not come off sounding harsh, that was not my intention.

Chapters 14 and 13 were very well written.

Excellent writing!!!

I like this story and I like where I think it might be heading. I would very much to read this story to it's final conclusion so, please do not abandon it again. I know RL happens but if ever you find yourself with a little free time to write, please add another chapter to this very good story.

If ever you find yourself with the dreaded writer's block, ask your readers and reviewers to give you some ideas to help you over the hump. I'm sure they will be glad to help.

Please consider finding a beta to help you with your story because as wonderful as this story is your grammar is still off. I understand if english is not our mother tongue because I have heard from a few people that writing in the english language is a little more difficult than actually speaking it.  I noticed that you made a few changes in the beginning chapters which was a nice improvement from when you first posted this story. 

Now my thoughts on Kagome. In this chapter, I am seeing that there is a possibility that she may be a reincarnation of Yumi. If this may be the case then Kagome cannot be the reincarnation of Kikyo unless Kikyo is also a reincarnation of Yumi??? If Sessho and Kagome are soulmates then their souls go way back to the beginning when kami made the souls in pairs...I am getting this line of thinking from chapter 5 when Miroku was explaining to Kagome about soulmates. I am probably making this more complicated than it needs to be. It is more than likely just a simple story of a pair of lovelorn soulmates transcending time and space to be reunited.

I am hopefully looking forward to your next chapter.

Cheers!!!

I definitely want to see where this is going!