I know this story wasn't recently posted; but I still wanted to tell you I really enjoyed it. It was creepy enough to be intriguing, yet not overly so. Nicely done.
I really liked this story. I found no horror to it, just a little creepy and sad. It would be nice to know what he did to Kagome and what became of her. I take it he got his freedom and revenge. That was the man that came while she was at the receptionist desk and as she watched him drive off, was that an illusion or was that Sessho in the flesh disguised? Did Kagome accidently awakened his spirit when she cut herself and dripped blood on the shrine grounds? So many questions that need answers. Do you suppose that you will do a sequel to this story or not? Anyway it was a well written and intriguing chapter.
marisel (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Jul 2016
No horror but a revenge story. Nicely done
Haven (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Jul 2016
Wow, subtle and dark. Very creepy and well written. I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing!
I loved this story though I am still on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next is there anymore chappies?
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