The introcution was wonderful, the presentation of settings and charchter were great! I am curious for more!

Oh I like the start of this story. Perhaps you should branch out a bit with this and not make Kagome so silly like the disney movie did with Jane there, but it is great so far...please continue!

I love the story and the way it's progressing... can't wait for an update!! 

That was AWSOME. Luckyliy for him He's still a demon with powers So Cool!!!!

Branch out. When you follow story lines exactly, the story becomes predictable and boring. I like what you're doing so far. I look forward to further updates.

I like it. Branch out! Let the creativity flow!