Please update soon this looks very promising...

I love this so far. Wish you would write another chapter or 10????

I love how this has started.  I want to know more and see where this story goes

Interesting intro so far! Please continue as I like your Sesshomaru POV, well done in character!

Can't wait to read more ~!:))

Ooooh sounds very very interesting! I hope that you shall continue!

Such a great plunny ! I can't wait for the next chapter update. Please continue with this story, it has all the makings of a great story.

Update soon onegai 

Ja ne 

You have caught my attention.  Such vivid detail... and only in the first chapter.  I can litteraly picture it happening.  Great job.  

I'm hooked! You definitely gave me just enough to want more, I can't to read what happens next, as well as the flashback to explain what gave both Sesshomaru and Rin such injuries please

I hope you continue to write and improve on this interesting story. I like it already. Keep up the good work.

I love it!! I hope you will be able to update soon 

Ohhh a Sesshy POV! :)  Love the write writing style so far - super descriptive. Yeah it might start of like similar  to other plot lines but I think you can really add your own spin to this tale. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep them coming.  

Oh I hope you continue this wass really interesting. I liked it.

I think the story's off to a great start!

Interesting start. I can't wait to read more

Wow What an Opening Chaper. Very Moving.

Please continue!!!! Its starting out great.

Must continue. Get cranking! I'd like to see where this new rabbit hole leads. 

Definately caught my interest!! Keep going, please! And I'll be sure to read it! Great start!