I enjoyed this story very much! I love the intracacies of it, from Bokuseno and his child, to the mess of time travel, to the different emotions in Kagome and Sesshomaru's eyes. The very basis of how he got interested in her made me happy, the emotion and depth in her eyes leading them to love each other is a wonderful play on the old 'window to the soul' saying!
You are amazing!! Ypu deserve every review. I review as much as possible even though the story is complete because ot helps the ratings and the writer, to me
You gave too much info. It needed to be her choice but the Sessh visiting gave her too much insight to me. The mom knowing was fine, but it left no mystery.
Oh my Wow!! This story is excellent
The smut really wasn't too bad at all. And I must say placing them in edo village is pure genius and unique. It would explain why Sesshomaru in the actual series didn't seem to have a castle while his mother did. It would ve so cool if they ended up settling there.
This has become an even more interesting tale. The humor is there but not over done. I lo e it. That Miroku comment at the end was nice!
Ooo there it is, that spitfire of a woman!
(Chapter 45) - Tue 26 Jul 2016
Love it. So romantic with a combination of action tasteless done. Good job.
Ok reading more and I see that there is a lack of Kagome-ness. What I mean us its like she practically ignored the fact that Sesshomaru almost killed her. Like this complacent attitude they had right after seems to fast. I almost felt like I missed a section of the story. Maybe add a scene where she woke up and blasted him from her panic or something like Sango attacked or something. But all in all this is a good tale
(Chapter 45) - Sun 17 Jul 2016
I really enjoyed reading your story. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
Well then! Good story. Kept it interesting. I'm excited to see if you make sequel! Good job with your writing and keep it up!
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