I am very pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter for this story. I read the first chapter a long time ago, and it has remained with me for one of the stories I wish would continue. I look forward to reading future updates. Thank you for returning to complete it!
I must admit when I received email from Dokuga that one of your favourite stories was updated, I was confused! I must admit with shame that I totally forgot the plot! So I reread it anew and fell in love with it! A beautiful touching plot! Pride and stubbornness are sesshoumaru's traits, so that he realised his mistakes only after she died and the gods told him point to the heart and brain, it is tragic so not only he realised only after her death but it took gods to bluntly spell it! Now he finally realise what he did. Indeed she wasn't his personal reward! Who is he to have such? I admit I agree with fate, he doesn't deserve her back as an immortal and maybe doesn't deserve her at all! No matter how much I love this pairing, this sesshoumaru mistreated her an entire life! Her entire existence was in vain because of him. Well in a way! A life devoid of kids affection and pride to stand next to the one she loved! Even though I hated how his mother called her, I must admit for him she was a glorified harlot or pet! I wouldn't forgive that! But I am not kagome! For a first time in a while I wish sesshoumaru to remain alone!
It's just the way I am, once my trust broken, it can't be regained! He betrayed her trust and love!
Wow so riled I got by this fic! Thanks for updating!
P.s can I ask a personal favour? Please use the commas, English isn't my mother tongue and sometimes without the commas I don't get the sense of don't understand about who is he thinking, saying! Please? It's just I have to reread every phrase a few times! It's my own fault!
Thx in advance!
Shyla (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Nov 2017
I'm so obsessed with this story, can't wait for more updates! It's beautifully written and your talent for originality is spectacular.
This is pretty cool, I cannot wait to read more! The storyline is actually unique I mean, I can really visualize an epic tale of love and tragedy, sacrifice and redemption and I am looking forward to your next chapter! Also Ghost Kagome rocks!!
DevaG (Chapter 6) - Tue 21 Nov 2017
So...........................Please tell me that I won't have to wait long for the next chapter. I need to know what will happen next. I need for kag to come back into the picture and show Sess what he is missing; that bastard. Loved this chapter.
Well written as usual. This was such a sad chapter. I thought they were going bring Kagome back but I guess Sessho has to go through final desolation-the breaking of Kagome's spirit. Mzybe he'll open his eyes and ears now to do what should have been done. Hopefully Kagome gets to come back in coporeal form. Excellent writing.
Ohh my god.......Its just so sad!!!! I am so angry at Sesshomaru but i pity him at the same time!!!! Poor porr Kagome!!! I know it is a tragedy but I hope it ends well.... they have just suffered so much....Kagome should get a happy ending! She deserves it. Hope you update soon, i am hooked to this! :D <3
Well that sucks ... for Kagome I mean ..
I knew he should've mated her ! Ugh the arrogance of not wanting to be like his father .. what his father had with a mere human princess was nothing to what he shared with Kagome... I'm hoping Sesshomaru suffers more about his decision but at the same time I'd like for Kagome to be happy... but it seems like she's once again stuck in a situation she had no control over .. thank you for the update!
Mona (Chapter 4) - Sun 12 Jun 2016
I'm looking forward to reading more soon.
Muy linda historia! Ojalá continúes escribiendo!! Can't wait the next chapter! :)
I didn't think it would be this good! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
Wonderful and intersting story.Well written and looking forward to future updates. I was a little confused in a paragraph where as I sent a PM to the author for a brief explanation. Great story.
Leaora (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Jun 2016
I really thought this story was going to remain a one-shot and after I had dried my tears and saved it as a favorite, I moved on. I am sooooo glad that you will continue the story as you crafted such a beautiful beginning.
xDori (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Jun 2016
I like where this is going. Take your time to write it out. Keep a good pace and bring on the feels! Lol. Thanks for writing :)
I actually remember reading this a long time ago and still love it. So beautiful. Thank you for the repost.
Mona (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2016
I was wondering what happened with this fanfic, hopefully you can update again soon.
You have beautiful prose, Aida. And I'm not sure how to put it across, all I can say is the emotions in your writing run so REAL. The flow is unimpeded by needless drama and flamboyance. It punched me straight in my gut. And that's the mark of good writing, in my personal opinion. So thank you for sharing. Wish to see more from you in the near future :)
Keo (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2016
This is sad! Can't wait to read how this story goes.
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