I liked the story and I liked the ending. It seems like maybe an epilouge might do it but thinking actually there are no loose ends to tie up. Everything was cut and dry. Ones imagination can tie up any loose ends they may think there are. Nice writing...you did good.

I realized I didn't review the last chapter. ('__')

I thought Sesshomaru was going to make a bloodbath from Hojo. However by sending him directly to Hell using the Meido was actually genius. It also serves as a reminder to everyone that Sesshomaru has the power to send an enemy to Hell if they ever decide to mess with him or his loved ones. AND the ending you wrote fit perfectly with the ending quote, very clever. ^_^

Thank you for all your time, effort, and imagination and Congrats! for finishing this story. Have a great day!

There just has to be more to this fanfic, this chapter just does not seem like an ending.  Please update more.

Great to see an update.:) So how was Hojo even able to afford the Brother's services? Is there going to be another event that will go down in history as a reminder to everyone why not to mess with Sesshomaru's mate? Not a huge bloodbath but maybe a 3 person bloodbath or a " 3 person disappearence" so Sesshomaru doesn't get in trouble. Well whatever you decide as a punishment for them, I look forward to Sesshomaru and Kagome reuniting. (^_^)

Hey! Sorry for not reviewing earlier. Yup, I love this story. <3 I'm so glad InuYasha was of help to the team. Can't wait to see how this story keeps developing. Keep up the great work and thanks for updating. Hope to read another chapter soon. ^_^ By the way did Sesshomaru ever do anything to Hojo for harrassing Kagome if they were already dating? How about Bankotsu and his brothers? If he did, did it cause further hate on Hojo's part? Wait, I just realized something. Are you saying Sesshomaru (who was way older than Kagome) began dating Kagome when she was in Junior High? Sorry, I'm overthinking things.

Love your story!! 

I was trying extremely hard to keep myself from smiling like an idiot as soon as I read about the BAU team.

I can completely imagine the characters. You have captured and portrayed very well their behavior and reactions. Also, your choice in villain was unexpected since the norm seems to be Naraku. I imagine the team is going to do a timeline right? I ask this because Kagome mentioned she was caught at the market but Inumaru said they were going to feed the ducks, so I'm slightly confused about the chain of events, how did he know something was wrong a.k.a she had gone missing?

As for the villain, I'm already flinching at what's going to happen when he gets caught. Is he the calculated, insane type? What kind of idiot tries to steal from Sesshomaru?

Amazing story so far and I am really looking forward to the next update. Thanks for posting this story.

-Literary Fan

I hope to be reading the third chapter soon and I'm glad I could help! If you need anymore help let me know!

I'm liking this story!!

I know you have already chosen the bad guy but here's my vote:

HOJO for human

Jinenji for hanyou

Jankotsu for youkai

I say you make it Kouga. A romantic rival.

Omg. A Criminal Minds x inuyasha crossover?!?!?!?

Be still my heart. You captured the team's characteristics so well! I felt like I was actually watching the show. I could visualize all their gestures.

This is DEFINITELY going to be interesting. I think the criminal should be multiple people working together. Maybe a secret council or something. However you'll still have the main guy. Someone as powerful (status wise) as sesshoumaru. Maybe a insane hojo who's obsessed with her and wants to wear a her skin. Lol!

Anyways. I look forward to the next chapter!

I say Bankotsu. As a technically human person he and the Band of Seven have no Tokyo for Kagome's Milo powers to pick up on. Or you could do Hojo. Like he never got over Kagome, became obsessed and spent years trying to become powerful (through human means...such as Yakima maybe) so he could steal her away.

It's Kouga...lol

This is interesting

Great story keeps you wanting more. Only thing I'd say is maybe better transitions when going between storylines. As for a villain my suggestion why not use Koga or Muso.

So far I like. As for bad guys, hmmm. Koga? You know, the whole "You are my woman and if you are interested in anyone else you are delsional or being forced" thing he has

OMG!!! I love this!! And what about a psycho Hojo?