Reviews for The Pact by Nenyanna

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xoMIA ;) (Chapter 21) - Fri 27 Oct 2017

Ah Kagome the hot head. I really hope that someone will shed light at least on the fact that it's not smart to let others you know nothing about see everything, aka the Naraku thing. Sigh. 


Crimson Rose (Chapter 21) - Fri 27 Oct 2017

I can't wait to know what happens next! please update soon!


Natalia (Chapter 21) - Fri 27 Oct 2017

Well I am not sure I like this situation!  Kagome is portrayed as ignorant and silly. Also there is a limit to her being good and seeing good in everyone especially naraku. I don't believe after her grandfather was sesshoumarus partner his whole life and she now,  that she doesn't understand canine behaviour and seems ignorant at youkai behaviour altogether! It's illogical really.  Not talking about her miko powers and simply normal intuition! She is behaving like a petulant child! 

I am sorry,  I mean no offence, this is the way I see it that's all and it rubs me the wrong way! Kagome is naive and good but not silly! So there is a limit to her behaviour,  at the moment I am simply disappointed... 

And don't get me starting on sesshoumarus behaviour!  Those two just jump around each other like toddlers and no one would admit the truth! Doesn't he see that he is hurting her? Or he just doesn't care? Thinking himself infallible and always right.  Lol they need lots of growing up!

The very much for updating!  I am so glad for the new chapter.  It's a showing on your talent that you made me so worked up on this. Eager to see more soon!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 20) - Thu 26 Oct 2017

I love this story!!!! I can't wait for the update. I'm glad Kagome got the chance to prove herself and regain her confidence in this chapter. Toward the end I was almost convinced you were going to have Sesshoumaru lose his control and force Kagome into submission with a duel of their own. lol Please update as fast as you can!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Tue 24 Oct 2017

Nice chapter and very nicely written...overall an intriguing and fascinating story.

Kagome is just too over confident almost a bit arrogant and her naiveness and trusting nature is what will get her into trouble. She is Sessho's weakness and now Nara or (we all now as Naraku) is aware. He will try to use this info to their detriment and his supposed triumph. 

How old is Kagome in this story and where did she get her training for her job? She seems like she knows very little about canine demons; like their nature and/or pack dynamics. She being a pact partner to one of the most powerful and high ranking demons in the country, one would think that she would try to gain as much knowledge available about the person. She seems to take everyone and everything at face value.

It seems that most authors have different variations of gauging a demon's age in comparison to humans, so how old are the main demon characters, including Rin, and the rest of the human characters? I just like to get a feel for their lifespans when I'm reading these stories. Lol:)

I like the development of your story and I look forward to future updates.  Excellent job!!!


Inuaddict (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Oct 2017

I AM IN LOVE WITH THE WHOLE STORY *sobbing*


Loveyaa (Chapter 20) - Sat 21 Oct 2017

Being true to your feelings is never a diaster :P We just gotta hope this doesn't come back to bite Sesshoumaru. Wonder if anyone is gonna let Kagome in on it. I do like the way you show the divide in Sesshoumaru and Kagome's adorable obliviousness. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Kagome will be able to surprise Mr. Nara and maybe everybody :)


Annie (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Welcome back. Great chapter. Please update soon.


kagomesirene (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Omg...did nobody realize that Naraku was undetectable until he entered the dojo?

...so the invisible thread and the knowledge that one, Kagomes attack does not make him fear her and two, witnessing Sesshoumaru loose control cause he bortled up his feelings does not bode well for Kgome and the Taisho clan....please update soon....


oshay1000 (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

LOVE LOVE LOVE, Keep it up :)

 


Lauren (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Yay! A new chapter! And no! Why did he show up? This is horrible. Naraku was allowed in the house, he was allowed to fight Kagome, and Sesshomaru's feelings were displayed in plain view of untrstworthy eyes. Whomever let that spider into the house needs to be melted.


Natalia (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Ah snap! You dirty hanyou! He saw everything! Now he will plan evil schemes!

And kagome poor naive kagome! She sees only good in everyone! Hope she will realize what a spider snake he is!

Thx for updating! Was missing this fic!


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 20) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Yay so glad you updated!!!


Chyna Soso (Chapter 7) - Fri 03 Mar 2017

Gawd your story is fantastic, that image of Kagome's death gave me chills and yes, I really do love Canada :D


Leahchan13 (Chapter 19) - Thu 23 Feb 2017

Let me tell you something I'm not disappointed in...this chapter XD lol I couldn't resist :P Anyways great chapter I can't wait to see what Kags does :D


Loveyaa (Chapter 19) - Thu 16 Feb 2017

Its like they are all right, so you can't really be mad at any of them. I wonder which one will get their way in the end though. I can't wait to see what happens next and to find out what Hideo and Inutaisho are talking about (maybe the jewel of four souls in Kagome) :) 


Inumoongodess (Chapter 19) - Thu 09 Feb 2017

I am in love with this story! I started reading from chapter 1 this morning and just finished the latest chapter. (would have finished sooner but had things to do.) Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the update! 


dotti (Chapter 19) - Tue 07 Feb 2017

Ok..let me tell you how I just binged read your story for the last two days lol. This is great!!! I'm so I retested in this up coming fight. I want to see what kagome can so. I love any story that shows she is no one to mess with and has earned her right to be by Sess's side. This is so exciting. Truly a fan. Please update soon.


REDWOLF (Chapter 19) - Tue 07 Feb 2017

Hahaha....Sesshoumaru just doesn't know what's coming with Kagome's plotting...love it :)


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 19) - Mon 06 Feb 2017

Well I can't wait to see her ambush Sessh.


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