Reviews for The Pact by Nenyanna

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Natalia (Chapter 33) - Wed 18 Jul 2018

I applaud your talent to spin such a tale and torture.. Er amaze us with each new chapter. Torture in a good way cause I am sitting on the literar edge of the seat waiting for every new chapter. Really applause!  This is becoming one of the best actual fic with each new chapter and I am sure it will become a classic! So thanks for updating.  Eagerly waiting for the next premise.  Poor Kagome has to somehow escape! 

Thx again! 


VS (Chapter 33) - Wed 18 Jul 2018

Hello,

why are you torturing us??? We want to see Sesshoumaru's arrival and rescue of Kagome...Anyway it was an interesting chapter, which answered a few questions I had. So her grandfather and Inunotaisho knew about the jewel and decided not to tell her ... that was a mistake! She would have been more cautious if she had known. And I'm sure when it comes out, she will feel betrayed!

I'm wondering how it is that Nara knows about the jewel inside of Kagome. Did he see the x-rays? Where did he find them? How long has he known?

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Usagi1323 (Chapter 32) - Mon 16 Jul 2018

This is seriously sooooo good!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! 


Xenoky (Chapter 32) - Sun 15 Jul 2018

I just want you to know, I logged in to my account to specifically leave you a comment on how much I love this story, and the characters that you have created. While I absolutely love the fanfics that keep up with Kagome being in the past, when stories like yours a written completely different  about the modern era, and fleshed out as vibrantly as you have (??∀?)? I love it. There aren't many stories that I read that aren't already completed, because I absolutely hate waiting, but your story is just so (?^_^)?(?^_^)?(?^_^)? good.


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 32) - Sun 15 Jul 2018

FINALLY I can't wait to find out what happens to Naraku once they get their hands on him. And honestly I hope he doesn't use tensagia untess it's to bring Naraku back and kill him again.


Night Wraith (Chapter 32) - Sun 15 Jul 2018

One word...finally!


Lorena (Chapter 32) - Sun 15 Jul 2018

Oh man...has it really only been 4 days of torture for Kagome? I hope there isn't an instant kill, is really like for him to suffer,  but I also don't want him to get away with it- I'd really love to read Kagome stepping in the right direction by gaining her powers enough to attack Naraku too...lol i know I'm all over the place~ I am already skipping ahead and wondering how everyone is going to act after this all comes to a head 


Elizabeth (Chapter 31) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

Ah! This rising action is killing me! (Especially after I reread the whole thing the last couple days). Please don‘t Leave us hanging too long! 


Shayla (Chapter 31) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

Why! Why! Do you leave us with such short cliffhanger chapter 


kagomesirene (Chapter 31) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

Sad to dsy but the only reliable one in this family seems to be Inuyasha ;3  

 

Hope he s gonna kick Narakus and Sesshoumarus ass :D


Amber (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

Oh my God I really love this story. Kagome really put herself in between a rock and a hard place but her actions are understandable because what’s the point of staying with someone that you see that she’ll have no future with. It’s not like he really gave her a chance or a choice. So I kind of feel bad that now she’s getting the short end of the stick and ultimately is going through hell because of her attempt to move on and isolate herself from the negativity. I feel like her family could’ve been a bit more supportive because of the things she was going through at work. LOL how would she have known that her boss would turn out to be a lunatic and will be trying to steal the sacred jewel(Which she doesn’t even know is inside of her). Please continue to update. I can’t wait to see what happens in a development of her relationship. Hopefully they find her soon before they emotionally or physically break her. I love this story so far and your writing style.


Natalia (Chapter 31) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

I should have known it would be a female to be the voice of reason  

I can only imagine how guilty Sesshomaru will feel.... But he deserves it! Its only corect în his mind what he is doing. 

Thx for updating  I enjoyed the chapter but can't wait to see what happens next  Please update again when you can  

Thx again  


sesshykagslvr (Chapter 31) - Fri 13 Jul 2018

Wow....we finally have someone who cares!


mikaelalucine (Chapter 31) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

THANK YOU, SANGO!! At least someone has a mind to go actually check in.


Lauren (Chapter 31) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

At least someone has some common sense and is checking in with Kagome. If it weren't for Dango, the woman would be bones before they went looking. 


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 31) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

Ahh so short! That was totally a tease!!!! Please update soon I'm dieing to know what happens next.


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 30) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

Gahhh I get so in thralled with it and every time I'm left with a cliff hangers. I hope on Sesshomaru's drive he goes by Kagome's house.


critique (Chapter 30) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

The suspense!! These short chapters now seem short and bitter sweet. I just can't figure out how will sesshomaru ever know, how will any of her friends ever know that she is being tortured! A lot of writers explain things to quickly and that takes the mystery away. Your story however has me hanging on the edge for more chapters because the chance for sesshomaru to find out and go into a rage is a very real possibility. 

 

It's almost like kagomes shinning knight in white armor isn't even on his horse yet to save her! She's gonna die! Will she escape herself and find sesshomaru before she dies??? Ugh I'm going to die just to wait for more updates. But I got high expectations! Keep up the good work. :3


kagomesirene (Chapter 30) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

OMG...Updates.... Yay....poor Kagome still hanging on to her feelings for Sesshoumaru....and what does he do? Still in denial!!? ...argh...want to pull my hair out...idiot! Go and find her!


Shayla (Chapter 30) - Thu 12 Jul 2018

Wow just wow , how did everything come to this!!


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