Reviews for The Pact by Nenyanna

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R (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 May 2018

I started an account just to review your story. I’m such a softie for stories where Sessh struggles with his internal conflict for Kagome and this one has it in spades. I’m enjoying the overall concept of the story and you have a noce balance between dialogue and narrative. I hope you keep updating this story and know that you’re appreciated for all the hard work you’ve put into it ;)


Lady Silver Moon (Chapter 28) - Tue 20 Feb 2018

Oooooh!!! Please update soon!!! I can't wait to read more!!!!


Stacie Bryan (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Dec 2017

I can't wait for more! 

This is very good :)


Loveyaa (Chapter 28) - Tue 19 Dec 2017

Sucks to suck. Kagome doesn't deserve this, but she is not entirely without fault. I wonder if the damsel will be able to save herself or if maybe someone will check up on her at work. Nothing like a face to face confrontation when someone isn't talking your calls. If Sesshoumaru thought he was having trouble with his beast before... I can't wait to see what happens next :)


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Dec 2017

Interesting I wonder what happens next


Lorena (Chapter 28) - Wed 13 Dec 2017

What are the chances that Sesshomaru's beast will feel something is amiss and investigate?! ???? I'll tell ya, I had a "that's what she gets" moment,  then felt really bad about it, lol. I hope she gets out of this soon, but more than that- I get that she made a horrible mistake with not only trusting a villain but also turning away from her loved ones, but I just wouldn't want for her to be gunshy over this one bad incident (even if it's a doozy) or for her to go to the extreme and be submissive to everyone she left behind...


Leahchan13 (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Dec 2017

Gosh dang it! How will you be rescued Kags! I'm so nervous but so eager to read more!


kagomesirene (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Dec 2017

OMG...the worst ever happened poir Kagome....hope Sesshoumaru starts to miss her and goes looking for her....realizing she has not been home for a whil

;o

Please update soon

 


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 28) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

I feel like you need to change the genre because this is not humour and romance. Wasn't expecting this kind of turn with no indication anywhere. 


LaDonna (Chapter 28) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

Wow


Satu82 (Chapter 27) - Sat 09 Dec 2017

Whaaaa! Please don't leave it at that! I can't handle a cliffhanger like that! 

That aside, this has been a super fun story, the mix of modern time and demon mystic stuff has been blended really well. Always a treat to read a new chapter and I can't wait for the next!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Oh-oh, Kagome's arrogance has started her downfall. Now she will see the real Nara-san and he did tell her to call him Naraku for a reason.

She should have listened to her family and friends. To bad that she already alienated herself from them. 

If Kagome thought Sessho's pride and ego were over the top she needs to look in the mirror at herself. She should have realized that her dream job was too good to be true then again Naraku kept her pretty distracted as the face for his 'company'...tsk, tsk, tsk.

This chapter was nice but just too short and what a cliffhanger. I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next installment.  :)

Great job in the writing skills...looking forward to more of it.

 

Cheers!!!

 

 


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Of course it was the tea. Kago me is so naive. 


zenfluence (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

THis is one of those fics I wish I wasn’t caught up on. Each chapter makes me want the next And I’m not that patient 


Skylar (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Oh no!!

Cliffhanger!


Natalia (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

And so it begins! 

I knew the tea would be the cause! 

Every time she drank tea my pessimistic side was yelling careful!  Don't drink!

I wonder what will happen now?

Thx for the wonderful update! 


LaDonna (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

No ma'am you will not stop it here. I am going to need you to write the other chapter now. Such a cruel thing to do lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.


Lauren (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

What is wrong with this woman? Every single thing Naraku is staying is sending up red flags. He values the face and image of the company more than the mission?! That's clearly the wrong answer. Ambition is more important than honor? WHY WAS SHE NOT RUNNING TO THE DOOR?! 


Loveyaa (Chapter 26) - Thu 23 Nov 2017

His plan is to wait it out...what could go wrong with that. I wonder what will be the straw that breaks Sesshoumaru's back. And Naraku can't be done with is evil genius masterplan either right. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Kimmy (Chapter 26) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

Love this story keep updating. Hopefully Naraku won’t physically hurt Kagome. please let sesshomaru come to his mind and fully accept that he wants to be with kagome. 


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