Reviews for The Pact by Nenyanna

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kagomesirene (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Dec 2017

OMG...the worst ever happened poir Kagome....hope Sesshoumaru starts to miss her and goes looking for her....realizing she has not been home for a whil

;o

Please update soon

 


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 28) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

I feel like you need to change the genre because this is not humour and romance. Wasn't expecting this kind of turn with no indication anywhere. 


LaDonna (Chapter 28) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

Wow


Satu82 (Chapter 27) - Sat 09 Dec 2017

Whaaaa! Please don't leave it at that! I can't handle a cliffhanger like that! 

That aside, this has been a super fun story, the mix of modern time and demon mystic stuff has been blended really well. Always a treat to read a new chapter and I can't wait for the next!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Oh-oh, Kagome's arrogance has started her downfall. Now she will see the real Nara-san and he did tell her to call him Naraku for a reason.

She should have listened to her family and friends. To bad that she already alienated herself from them. 

If Kagome thought Sessho's pride and ego were over the top she needs to look in the mirror at herself. She should have realized that her dream job was too good to be true then again Naraku kept her pretty distracted as the face for his 'company'...tsk, tsk, tsk.

This chapter was nice but just too short and what a cliffhanger. I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next installment.  :)

Great job in the writing skills...looking forward to more of it.

 

Cheers!!!

 

 


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Of course it was the tea. Kago me is so naive. 


zenfluence (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

THis is one of those fics I wish I wasn’t caught up on. Each chapter makes me want the next And I’m not that patient 


Skylar (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Oh no!!

Cliffhanger!


Natalia (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

And so it begins! 

I knew the tea would be the cause! 

Every time she drank tea my pessimistic side was yelling careful!  Don't drink!

I wonder what will happen now?

Thx for the wonderful update! 


LaDonna (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

No ma'am you will not stop it here. I am going to need you to write the other chapter now. Such a cruel thing to do lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.


Lauren (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

What is wrong with this woman? Every single thing Naraku is staying is sending up red flags. He values the face and image of the company more than the mission?! That's clearly the wrong answer. Ambition is more important than honor? WHY WAS SHE NOT RUNNING TO THE DOOR?! 


Loveyaa (Chapter 26) - Thu 23 Nov 2017

His plan is to wait it out...what could go wrong with that. I wonder what will be the straw that breaks Sesshoumaru's back. And Naraku can't be done with is evil genius masterplan either right. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Kimmy (Chapter 26) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

Love this story keep updating. Hopefully Naraku won’t physically hurt Kagome. please let sesshomaru come to his mind and fully accept that he wants to be with kagome. 


Natalia (Chapter 26) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

That was sad...the last moment tore at my heart!

Thus the whole chapter I wanted to bash my head against the table again! Kidding! It was just so frustrating! You are. A master! True master at making all my emotions riled! 

Thus I am not yet satisfied with his situation! He must suffer more because I know something big will happen that will make him realise what a mistake he did but kagome will easily forgive him so yes...

Somehow I want him to remain alone or at least to grovel a lot more... But then my romantic heart will want a happy ending... So yes so hard!

Why not talk to izayoi is she alive? I don't remember! Why not talk with his mother and see different pov? What right does he have to decide for everyone? For kagome? She can decide if it's worth it! Besides fates kami's or whatever made them soul mates so this is a fate? Don't they know better than him?

Stubborn fool! 

Thanks very much for updating! 

I had a busy day and just returned home! I am so tired but when I saw you updated i couldn't go to bed without reading the chapter! I had to know what happened!

Again thank you for writing and updating so soon!

 I enjoyed every word!

Take care!

 


Marina (Chapter 26) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

Hmm I wonder what would happen if he was presented the happy den scenario but with someone else as the sire. After all, visiting orphanages would make a perfect, ver public act of charity for Kagome’s new boss...


LaDonna (Chapter 26) - Sun 19 Nov 2017

Thank you so much for all your hard work on this story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter of it. I just love this story.


kagomesirene (Chapter 25) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

Ups sorry...seems something else Was saved in my clipbord ss well....sorry...jusr some hotels in Scheveningen/ den Haag and a video to show my niece how to make a wreath DIY...sorry sgain. 


kagomesirene (Chapter 25) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

Albion hotel

Bella vista

Duinzicht

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/4990807/13/

 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=R-X-VehxtkI

 

Sigh....well...what does her family expect?....a secret on every corner and nobody is brave enough to share...or don't they trust Kagome or her abilities enough to tell her...they give her nothing but vague hints...she wants this chance to change the world for the better and is disappointed cause it seems that noone believes her capable in her job...

...uh...poor little creepy crawlies...sooo many of them...shudder...

Keep up the great work and update asap

Ending review without deigning to mention Mr. Icicle who is not dignifying Kagome with any reaction at all :3


Askosh Mosey (Chapter 22) - Thu 16 Nov 2017

Somehow, since Sesshoumaru is adamant that by letting Kagome go will avoid Kagome's death, I would love to see how he would react and cope in knowing that what letting her go means her death.

 

Anyway, you've done such a fantastic work with this piece. I'm rooting for you all the way.


hazel (Chapter 25) - Thu 16 Nov 2017

Thank you very much for uploading! I look forward to the next chapter! =D


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