Love it! Can't wait to see if this will be a series of inter-connected drabbles or something else, but the first chapter was just so nice and sweet! Thank you! I hope you write more to this!
Hello, just wanted to drop a line and let you know I enjoyed your story. It is nice to read a story that keep everyone in character, and portrays Kagome as a girl with some common sense! I love the fact that you are allowing her grow and move on from Inuyasha because she realizes he is mistreating and she deserves better.
I also like the portrayal of Sesshoumaru as a male this is an adult and has learned to care for others and keep them safe. Looking forward to reading more of your short stories!
Kim
I disagree that this is not as good as your other story. You may have had a few grammatical errors but this was very well done. I'd love to see a continuation of it actually!
Glad you're back and this was a great read!
Absolutly amazing. I have no critisms, only words of great praise and achievement. Please continue to write, I have a very good feeling about the time you finally choose to grace us with your future chapter stories and look forward to reading them.
Personally I liked it. Very well written. And like the first one shot very enjoyable.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
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