Lovely chap well written.
I'm glad to see the end and that they're happy. Really enjoyed your style and story telling. But, I feel like Sesshoumaru is still getting the short end of it. Yes he finally has Kagome and is finally loved, with him treasuring that love. But that's a lot of trauma, centuries of it, that he's supposed to instantly be cool with for the greater good. Yes, they had their reasons with the prophecy and all, but that doesn't make it hurt less or take away the memories.
What an amazing story this has been!! The way you wrote it was almost poetic, and the lessons learned by all, made the emotions so real!
I trully enjoyed each and every part of it, and look forward to your next work! It is hard to conceive that in just 9 chapters you managed to describe the span of many centuries and did it so well! I really love your stories, and each time I see a new one from you, I can't help but feel grateful that your muse is still wispering to your soul! Tank you again for thi story and know that it was enjoyed from beginning to end!
Warm hugs and best wishes:
MidCat
More, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
There are Angels God put on this Earth Who care for us and guide us. You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us. They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears. They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile. They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child. God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own. She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown. She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her Mother
I just found this story it was a epic read. You could have made the last chap the end that's how good it was.
Leaora (Chapter 8) - Tue 03 May 2016
Ah hah! It is not over!!! Phew! I was about to break out the water works.
Great story, keep it coming.
My Gosh you are such and amazing writer. Please update ASAp!! I'm going crazy here.
Great story :) keep it coming!
Deana (Chapter 7) - Tue 19 Apr 2016
Awesome story! I enjoyed the path you took. I don't remember anyone being this creative with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's beginings. Can't wait for the next update.
Drianax (Chapter 7) - Tue 19 Apr 2016
Good story! Yes, I'm reviewing the entire seven chapters in this review, but it was so good, I couldn't help but read each chapter do quickly that leaving a review was impossible. Can't wait to see the final battle and the disposition of Kouga et al..keep it up, and get the next chapter up quickly!
Please update soon. I'm really enjoying this story so far. I have a feeling there are few chapters left, probably one or two, but I still can't wait.
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