Nicely written thoughts from Sesshoumaru's mind. This would be a good start to a nice and interesting chapter story. I hope you might consider the thought and if not I will be looking forward to more stories from you. Great job!

  LOVED IT!!

I really can't help to think that these very same thoughts would of ran through his character mind in the anime,  if more was shown of him and his innermost thoughts.

Very nice story.  I like it a lot.  Even though I did catch a few grammatical/spelling mistake, they did not take away from the story.  Please, keep writing.  I look forward to more from you.

That was very well written. I hope to read more of your  work.it held my attention from first word til last. Very good.