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sesshykagslvr (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

This is such a unique story. I am already engrossed in Kagome's journey and I giggle every time Kei "Mews" at her....its funny to me at least that it's the same word with so many meanings. Great job! Looking forward to more.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

This was another great chapter. Kagome is slowly becoming a bad ass the stronger she gets. At the end of Kagome's metamorphis I hope she becomes an Inuyoukai like Sesshomaru and have a beast like his. That would be awesome. Update soon. Love your style.


Kahdejus (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

I look forward to more. I love crazy Totosai, I wonder what her next transformation will be of.


Daniela (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

I have never seen this sort of plotline before..very unique story! *^* I am veey curious about the different form Kagome will go through. Please update soon :3


princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

Wow it's like going through stages of childhood. What form will kagome take on next? Does her form depend on what she eats or whatever she's hunting ate? If kagome finds a youkai with strong pure blood will she gain a human form like sesshomaru's? 

 

Update soon onegai 

 

Ja ne 


Akoq (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

wow. This is totally new concept. I like it. Keep it up.


Jelly (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

I really like this! I think it's different to watch Kagome start over again. Earthy and comparably mellow is how I'd describe it, which fits her bill quite well. I can't wait for the next chapter!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2016

Wow. Kagome must have looked down right ugly when she turned into a serpent the way you described her. Does she just randomly change into any kind of youkai? She doesn't seem to change to look like the beast they are fighting, so that's why I am making the assumption that she justs changes into random creatures. Will she continue to change into different beings like a shape-shifter for the rest of her life or will there be a stop to this metamorphing at some point along the way?

The scene where Kei was acting like a drill sargent while he was training her was very funny. It reminded me of my days when I was in the military going through my initial training.

You don't seem to need a beta since you are proofreading on your own. Keep up the great work. More updates please :)


Katrina Kee (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

Atta girl Kagome! Look on the bright side! You now have the same number of limbs and two eyes instead of one as an oni! Ha ha! i don't know when you'll stop changing and evolving, but good luck in everything that you do!

I can't wait for chapter three! This is great! soon Kagome will (hopefully) meet up with all of her old friends and impress them (perhaps Smexy Sessy as well???) who knows?

 


roberta. (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

This is so interesting and original just love it.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

I see where you started out with 11 chapters of the drabble and then you finally changed it to one chapter and broke it down into separate segments. I liked the way you did that, it was easier to read. This is a very fascinating story so far and it is well written. It is very interesting how Kagome is changing and I am anxious to see what being she will turn out to be and what powers and abilities she will possess. I am looking forward to when she meets up with her old companions and finally Sesshomaru. Kei is a cute and good friend to Kagome. I am glad that she has a companion to travel with and is not alone on this new adventure. It would be nice if she turns into a beautiful Inuyoukai with powers to match Sessho.

Good job and looking forward to more updates soon. Loving this story thus far :)


Katrina Kee (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

Well for a flea, I bet that Kagome is a pretty one! I wonder if she will meet up with Myoga? Will he give her some tips or try to court her himself? After all, in the anime series, he thought that she was was hot in her bathing attire! Ha ha! I love this and am going to continue to read since I just had to review after just reading the first chapter! Kagome is just sooo cute!!! Someone needs to draw a picture of little ole' flea Kagome! I would volunteer but I cannot draw! So sad! Quick question. Does she have 2 sets of arms like Myoga did in the series? I would probably freak out a little bit for that as well as for being a tiny flea. Even if it is a demon.


roberta. (Chapter 11) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

Great little story. I usually don't like the dribbs but there was  enough of them to get a good flow to the story. Looking forward to seeing more.


Lammy (Chapter 10) - Fri 15 Apr 2016

What an interesting concept! I am looking forward to the rest of the story. 


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