So sad, so dark and so well written that I can't help but love it.
swift death (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Aug 2010
yes, hopefully indeed there are no mistakes because if there are kagome will secceed the second time. nice story by the way :)
Rikayu (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 May 2009
| very nice. i really like it when author's write as a perspective behind sesshoumaru.
poison_ivy (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 May 2008
| Fantastic piece. Well written, memories inserted without author's notes to denote them, very clean and eloquent. The characters are all quite believable in their actions, even Sesshoumaru's love for Kagome. Emotional turmoil and introspection done well!
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 May 2008
| That was very haunting and beautiful. The idealist in me wants to see her open up and be with him. The realist sees her pain and not being able to overcome when someone you love betray you. I'm amazed by this piece. Thank you for writing it.
| A wonderful piece of writing, to be sure. I enjoyed the reading, and you truly have an art for having characters express their emotions.
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