I LOVE this story! ! ! !
I only have ONE little problem with it. I would love it even more if there was an epilouge at the end. Was the child that was hiding and then ran when he approached Shippo? (I was almost sure that it would be Rin, since you didn't clarify in any way.) I'd love to know how her family reacts to her, especially his father. But most of all, I would love a scene where they realize she's pregnent, since you hinted that she might be able to get pregnent.
short and sweet like i love. do a sequel so that we can find out about the girl that ran away from Sesshoumaru after his concert. i also want to see if Kagome gets to have babies too. so please do one, ne? great story. c'ya
That was a wonderful story. It saddened me and warmed my heart, many emotions inbetween too! i hope you keep up the awesome writing! :3
Cute story....I really enjoyed it.
I adored this story, and I would love to see a sequal to it! The ending in this is so sweet and a very easy lead in to a sequal, yet still feeling like a proper ending too, you did a great job with it!
Leaora (Chapter 10) - Sun 31 Jul 2016
For the record, I love all of your stories! I eagerly await each update and instantly regret finishing another chapter as it brings the end that much closer.
Marie (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Jul 2016
I absolutely loved it. The ending perfect. I dont know what to call as story that's so complete. A sequel though nice would not be neccessary for how complete this story is. Bravo!
iin (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Jul 2016
that's so a touchymoment..thanks
Please do a sequel!! I love this storry!! XD
Mona (Chapter 10) - Fri 29 Jul 2016
I look forward to reading the updates to your other fanfics and also hope you do a sequel to this fanfic. I just keep wondering what Shippo meant, can she have kids of her own. Anyway this was an awesome read.
That was a beautiful chapter. Very nice. I love this story! Thanks for updating.
Nicole (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Jul 2016
Lovely chapter!
Marie (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Jul 2016
Awe love the chapter. But why no sesome babies???owell still good story
Sad but sweet. I'm sure Sessions will want to take revenge for her regardless.
This chapter was so sad and sweet at the same time. Loved it. Wonder if Sesshoumaru will to something about getting justice for Kagome against those wolf demons. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Ashatan (Chapter 8) - Tue 05 Jul 2016
I love this story! They are both shy, and both have lost someone. I look forward to seeing what you have in store for us with Seshoumaru and Kagome next time! Where is Shippo during the storm? And what DOES a Kitsune charge? Lol
I love this story please do continue!!
Awwww, so sweet! Where's Shippo?
So lovely
Inu had a name for 'the girl' and Sesshoumaru is being all fluffy. ... love this chapter.
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