I love this story! I love SessKag’s relationship! They are so right and flawless and perfect for each other in this story - like two magnets drawn to each other - they just belong... I was hoping that Sess would finally realize how much he loved and missed Kagome but alas, that scenario seems less likely with Sess realizing how much he values their....friendship.... ARGH!! Seriously, who could only be friends with such a beautiful, sexy creature!? Especially with all that heat between the two of them? I feel like the 16th chapter with the rape and suicide watch was an unexpected twist. I was actually expecting ,probably like a lot of other people, that Kagome was going to end up pregnant what with the indecent proposal and that they didn’t use a condom that last time. I thought well, that’s one way Sess can get what he wants.
I feel for Kagome. She has her standards. It must have been so hard to leave Sess but she stood her ground and held out for true love. But what does she receive for her troubles?l of holding onto her ideals? To be even more broken...possibly shattered. I am interested in seeing what will happen with these new developments. Will Sess help with picking up the pieces? Well, not yet, at least not for a while according Naoki.
Halfway through the story your writing style changed. It became more fluid, flowing, run-on sentences and fragments and you beautifully captured the pent up and unexpressed emotions and the heartfelt feelings between Sesskag. Beautiful! Well done!
I also wanted to add, I listen to music while reading and the album "Bad Ideas" from Tessa Violet was my soundtrack to this story, and it fits all too perfectly. Just a tip for anyone reading!
I just found this story, and binged it. I really love the way you write, and I love this story. I hope you will come back to finish it! You've made me laugh, cry, and be incredibly frustrated over this story. Honestly, it could be a best selling novel and I'd believe it, it just sucks you in so well. Wish you the best and hope to see another chapter one day!
Calile (Chapter 16) - Sun 27 Sep 2020
Oh god I missed this story I can't wait to see show it ends! I do hope it has a happy ending and isnt a vague "let's figure this out together" that doesn't actually give us any closure. I really hope they make this work and Kagome gets the help she needs and Sesshomaru learns to express his feelings.
I don't mind some fluff! I def enjoyed how sweet this chapter was.
Awhhhh, is it weird that I found that whole sexual scene super sweet? He's obviously a vary caring and attentive lover.
Wow! That citrus, though! Hot damn!
Wow that was explosive! What a great way to end that segment!
AMAZING chapter! I'm really enjoying the premise so far. I'm also interested in your contest!
witty (Chapter 16) - Thu 20 Aug 2020
I enjoy stories that show the darker side of sex workers. That it's not a "fun", "empowering" lifestyle, but actually treacherous, humiliating, and full of broken-down women (and men). I empathize with Kagome's struggles. Sesshomaru thinks of himself as some "captain-save-a-hoe" when in reality there's nothing he has really done for Kagome. I assume that Kagome had been raped and that what the straw that broke the camel's back. What a tragic life.
Kekee06 (Chapter 16) - Thu 20 Aug 2020
I literally binged this today. Forget work I just couldn't stop. Please tell me the next 7 chapters are coming out soon. I NEED more. I NEED to know what's next.
Oh wow! I... just read all of this in one go, and this fic is absolutely stunning! Sess and Kagome had such a cute thing going in the beginning, but life happens. And sometimes things don't work out. The Kouga segment was cute for a brief moment, and then heartbreaking. To have her close friend and childhood love sound like the very people that were originally against them. I'm so sorry for her. And that small moment of rekindled hope between Sess and Kagome! I wanted to cry! I was actually curious if Kagome had a accidental pregnancy for a moment. But good job for Naoki for stepping in and being a good friend. I can't wait to see where else you go with this fic! Keep up the great work!
Yes, I'm leaving another review. I realized I didn't say all I wanted to after I pressed submit lol.
I just wanted to say that I'm really happy to see this story back again. I re read it all the way thru and loved it all over again. You write beautifully, you do darker themes without it seeming too over the top or too light-hearted for the themeing.
I love how you portray them as imperfect and slowly tell us why they are.
Gah I hope you update soon lol
Man I just... I have words, many words. But I just really hope you update soon.
Poor Kagome, man she really just can't catch a break. And finally, SOMEONE tells Sessh that he isn't as helpful as he believes he is. I'm happy he listened, happy that he's leaving it to someone else to be in control.
Pleeaasseee update soon.
Carlyn (Chapter 16) - Wed 19 Aug 2020
Oh wow. That was very dark. But I like how you bring such insight into the mind of someone like Kagome's character here. Many people don't understand that these women don't usually feel they have any other choice than to sell their bodies, losing a piece of themselves every time they do, and often leaving them feeling there's no way to escape the life for one reason or another. The road to emotional recovery from that lifestyle is long and hard, even without the consideration of other factors usually in play like drug addiction and violent pimps. And for someone like Sesshomaru to be forced to wait for her to deal with her problems rather than attacking them himself must be torturous. Sesshomaru does NOT like to feel helpless. I really like this story. I was a little uncomfortable with Kagome in such an occupation at first, but I settled into it. Prostitutes usually start out as "good girls" before life throws a curveball at them anyways. I look forward to reading more soon! Thank you for sharing!
Reread from the start to refresh my memory. Such a good story. Can't wait to see how it goes
susie (Chapter 9) - Wed 19 Aug 2020
i like their banter in this on. i like all the miko demon stuff. it was cool how you get into the powers effects on each other in detail.
susie (Chapter 4) - Wed 19 Aug 2020
this chapter was so good! i loved the convo when they first sat on his couch, and everything after that was so perfect and hot. this is so fun to read.
susie (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Aug 2020
uh, i'm already hooked! lol.
just found this story today, but that first chapter was amazing. you have my eyes glued to every word, and very invested on what is going to happen next. perfectly written (wouldnt' know at all you aren't native in english), and loving the plot so far. well, im off to read the next chapter. killer start! thanks for sharing, and looking forward to more. i also don't know what this contest is or when you posed it, but i'd be interested to hear about it if its still going on.
Omgggggggggggggg!!!!! I'm screaming after this chapter! No pitchforks, just shock. XD
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