Reviews for The Terror Within by Dlat

Tana_san (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Sep 2024

This is really an intriguing story if you would ever think to continue it. You left it open for interpretation and while that's OK, I think it merits more from the writer.

Inuyasha transformed while he was on his human night. Don't remember that ever happening. Interesting concept, and Sesshoumaru taking care of Kagome at his home is a nice thought, I agree with Kagome, why? He allows her liberties within person that just isn't Sesshoumaru that everyone knows, but in his room he takes her to bath and sit to eat, then they seem to get too close too fast.

Does he have feelings he's been harboring toward her and just now allows himself to show her? 

So, many avenues to look into. What do you think? Are they still in pursuit of jewel shards? Please think about continuing. I'll definitely read it.

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Jessie (Chapter 2) - Wed 24 Aug 2022

Awww Sesshomaru is Soo sweet I love it!!!


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 2) - Fri 28 Jun 2019

Interesting 


Shanika (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Jun 2019

j (Chapter 2) - Tue 18 Jun 2019

Looking foward to more seems to be a interesting story so far 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2016

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Easter!


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