Very cute I could imagine his worry face lol 

funny and impresive :)

this was rather funny, i didnt notice any horrible spelling or grammar errors, but the ending seemed a bit rushed, if you would fleshout out that a little it would make the ending flow much better...well done and keep up the good work:D

Oh goodness!! Please continue this!! It was a hoot!  I thought it was such a brilliant piece!  (there are so many exclamation marks….)  The dialogue was excellent, the characters were all IC, description – full marks… What more can I say?!  There were a couple of spelling errors but nothing terrible.  You have a knack for humor.

Normally I would point out my favorite scenes so that you could see the high points of your writing, but the entire chapter stole my heart.  There’s just something about tampons and rin that maketh me giggle.  I think it’s kinda the same deal with condom fics… >.<  Aww rin, she’s so precious.  You write rin very well. 

I feel like a doofus for showering you with inane compliments, so I’ll stop here.  Good job and keep it up! (for my sanity, I really do need an update!)

ducky out!

This was a cute one-shot.  Stories where Sesshoumaru is confronted with Rin's maturing always amuse me.  It was a little fast-paced for my taste, but it was well written and has the potential to be turned into a chapter story if you think of other ideas for it.

A very cute short story.  There were some amusing moments throughout, but Rin wanting to show Sesshoumaru her new 'underwear' was the funniest.  Sesshoumaru seems a bit ooc in this fic but considering the circumstances it wasn't too far fetched that he wouldn't be his usual stoic self. Kagome deciding to join his group was a bit off.  Her staying with Rin during the girls first menstrual cycle makes sense but beyond that?

Two thumbs up, a well written one-shot.

It was cute! Especially the part about Rin wanting to show him her new clothes. Thought the end was a little rushed and Kagome a bit out of character. Still an enjoyable read. Would like to read more if you chose to make it a chapter story.

The story started off on point but then started veering OOC character traits and then rushed into the ending. There was no explaination, no build up ...no romance really. It covered a very untouched topic and while Kagome & Rin handled it well - the romance angle and her staying could have been kept out of it. I did find the part of Rin wanting to show Sess her underwear cute...poor child has no idea.

Hey there! I didn't know you are on Dokuga. Wonderful. I liked this little fic. I thought it was hugely rushed, though. I can't believe that Kags would simply leave her group for what was hinted would be weeks at a time, or forever, without saying goodbye to them. It is well written, but I would have liked to see it fleshed out a little more. Anyways, I really like your writing, as I read 'His and Hers' a long time ago on another site and it is still one of my favs. Good luck!

This story started out really cute, even if a bit OOC, is was nothing too extreme, but was a bit disapointed with the ending.  I can completey understand her staying for the week to get Rin used to the idea of becoming a woman, but she's already talking about having to go back home after almost an entire month.  It was a bit too rushed for me.  But other than that, I really enjoyed it.  It made for a very cute read :).