love the updates! oh boy i hope some how its not a trap her going with the southern lord......but that would be a good twist. i am looking forward to seeing how all this plays out.
Awesome! I wonder if Ryo will make it back before Kagome departs. Also how are they going to disguise Kagome, maybe kitsune magic to change her appearance.
KairaB (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Apr 2016
Will Sesshoumaru find out about the baby soon? Great story so far.^^ Please, keep up the good work.^^
guest (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Apr 2016
What happened with the baby? :(
Its ok nobody perfect. . Improve it by yourself, dont rush anything, just take it easy. . Ganbatte!! ;)
Anonymous (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Apr 2016
How can she want her pregnancy as a surprise for sesshomaru when she didnt even know she was pregnant to begin with? Also PLEASE check your spelling and grammar before posting, this will drastically increase the interest and comprehension of your story
tonya (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Apr 2016
please tell me she doesnt lose the pup!?
tonya (Chapter 27) - Sat 09 Apr 2016
great chapter!
Waaa. . She got pregnant. . XD. . But something bad must be happened . . Oh god!!
I wonder if shes got pregnant because he just a huge dog with a big appetite XD
Liking the chapters, keep it coming. Happy Belated Easter!
tonya (Chapter 25) - Tue 05 Apr 2016
great chapter! i hope that naraku will get what's coming to him. i cant wait to see who will take over as lord of the north
tonya (Chapter 24) - Tue 05 Apr 2016
excellent as usual. uh-oh i wonder what naraku will do next? and when will kagome and sesshoumaru mate?
I'm guessing Aya is the spy? I thought it strange when she said she broke out of Naraku's dungeon while there's been no previous mention of her having any fighting or special skills n she didn't need to be abducted along with Kagome. Aside from Kagome's family n Sango, she's n the most favourable position.
Your writing is definitely improving. Thank you for the fast updates n keep up the good work dear~
Keep it coming!!
Anonymous (Chapter 24) - Tue 05 Apr 2016
You desperately need to proof read or a beta. Kagome sounds stupid towards the end. Naraku gave her to Goro knowing what he was going to do. How is he good?
tonya (Chapter 23) - Mon 04 Apr 2016
i have some theories: aya, inuyasha, or hmm well i dont know who else, but can't wait to find out
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