Oh wow. So Sesshomaru's long lost daughter is kagome's lady maid. Oh that is going to be one big reveal when Kagome finds out. Especially it was by a woman he did love once. Personally, I really like the Luna arc and the way it was written. Though it was sad to see the females suffer due to one beliefs, it did in the end, make them stronger. That's how I interpreted. I really enjoy your writing style. Keep the chapters coming. I wanna see if Sesshomaru and Kagome turn into a loving couple from all this mess.
Eroviaa Hunter (Chapter 22) - Fri 14 Apr 2017
*face palms* Kagome pretty much has failed in her position as the 'prefect mate'. Even with all the posturing ( I say that now after completely the chapter) she did with Sesshomeru, in the end she got face rolled. I hope she has some redemption otherwise she is more mouth than strength. SHe needs to stiffen up that backbone and accept wholehearted that she is a demon and act like it.
(Chapter 22) - Wed 12 Apr 2017
Hola, me gusta la historia, como estas llevando los personajes, van evolucionandocon la trama y si quedan occ no importa! Prefiero eso antes que una historia repetitiva!
Espero el próximo capítulo
(Chapter 21) - Sun 09 Apr 2017
Great story and thickening plot however I'm confused about Aimee. In earlier episode didn't Aimee said that Inukimi locked her in the dark dimension numerous times in her toddlers here? Shouldn't she not be affected by the magic then?
Eroviaa Hunter (Chapter 21) - Fri 07 Apr 2017
Luna is a acrazy bitch of a villian that slithers around playing 'nice'. Sesshomeru's family is so disfunctional it's crazy. Poor inu papa is just trying to keep his head up. Inu is on the path of revenge, and now this to poor Rin. I hope there is some good to come of this and that Luna gets her ass HANDED to her by an enraged full dog formed Kagome. Kovu is a lovely character that I can see coming around every so often to raise a little trouble and ruffle the dogs but still is an allie to them. I look forwards to the next installment :)
pinky (Chapter 20) - Wed 05 Apr 2017
|will inukimi plans come to pass Co's she's just speaking as if luna won't fight back, I hope she survives and be a proper mother to sess even if it's late
Mrvc (Chapter 7) - Sun 02 Apr 2017
Hmm, dont want to furthee read anymore, i dont like kagome's character here, full of insecurities, and there is no character development, no depth , the mother is insane, ciao!
Darknessqueen0789 (Chapter 19) - Sat 01 Apr 2017
So sad for Kikyo. Also what is wrong with Luna? Does she wish that Sesshomaru had mated with a "regular" demon or does she just hate Kagome in general? Great chapter. I enjoy reading this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Toni (Chapter 18) - Tue 28 Mar 2017
Great story! I think Lady Luna is waiting on the birth of the next heir! Kagome is gonna be soo pissed when she find out!
Enjoying the story.
(Chapter 18) - Tue 28 Mar 2017
I don't think Sesshomaru was acting like a fool. How could he not feel this way about her? She has tortured him since he was little and was never an actual mother to him. As an author, you can't build severe trauma and suffering of a character and then ridicule the character's emotional and logical response. But it often feels like his character is being forced into earning someone's dislike.
(Chapter 17) - Sun 26 Mar 2017
That was beatiful at the end! And I must say that I love the family intrigue.
Good, keep it coming.
Awesome chapter of Kagome's and Sessho's mating ceremony. Kagome's thought processes are a little ahead of its time. She is very head strong and feminimistic but back in that time (whatever time period) most women I believe did not have much say unless they are head of household and or landholders, of course I could be wrong. Sessho could make decisions without her say so based on ownership. He now owns her body, mind and soul. I think Sessho should never had told her about the impregnation. Like she said she knew what type of person he is and she made the decision to mate him. After four years of beciming a demon you would think that she would have spent some time learning about the demon culture and rituals. That would have been the first thing I would have done, along with gaining political knowledge.
I wonder what the Lady Mother gave her as a gift. I don't think it's the same stuff Naraku was going to give her. Looking forward to future updates soon.
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Mar 2016
But without inukimi they wont be together.. but i'm glad sessh got kagome pregnant. . I want to hear from you in the next chapter how they are fairing. . And how about kohaku?? Does naraku will strike again? I hope he is die somewhere . .
(Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Mar 2016
I hope Kagome come to terms with her insecurities and perhaps do something for the servants to show she has not forgotten them.
(Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Mar 2016
Well, I'm ecstatic!!! Lady Mother definitely needed some knocking around and I really don't think she's had enough..... Someone still needs to torture/ rape/ kill Naraku so Kagura can be free and everyone else can breathe a sigh of relief. Also, please save poor Kohaku!
Makes kagome strong!! Yey
(Chapter 14) - Mon 07 Mar 2016
Nice!! I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.
(Chapter 14) - Mon 07 Mar 2016
I like this fast chapter-update very much! Thank you! (>^-^)> <3
Would you believe me if I told you that I nearly fainted by the end of this chapter?! I am so happy about it!
Now Kagome can't even chicken out of this promise! :D lol!
I still can't believe it! What a great turn of events! Naraku got what he deserved! And Sesshomarus sharp mind... I swear... I want his brain... And his empty threats (at the end of the chapter) are so... perfect ! lol (Well I am not really sure if they were "empty". I believe he would do that once she promised everything he listed.)
And Inuyasha... lol...he has another child... How will Ame react to that? Does she like Inuyasha at all?
And Inukimi... lol ... She is really the best. Whatever she is doing... it always turns out the way she wants! So why are they all against her? - LoL
Now Sesshomaru can't even say to his mother that "this is her last chance". She turned everything to the better for him...partly... xD
Great chapter! I think you couldn't make me more happy at this very moment!
(Sorry for short review)
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