Excellent. But the Sesshomaru you depicted did not seem like the type to instantly believe what he saw after witnessing Kikyo's behavior. He seems too preceptive for that. But this was a wonderful portrayal of the characters
Great one-shot. Sad there are people like the irl who just want to ruin things for people to be hateful.
Great one-shot! I'm glad that Kikyo also got hers!
|Love your story, thoug i love all that you had written, i wish for you to write more in the future... and if only i wish to read something close to feudal era one will describe of sesshomaru's life as a lord having many women but still chose to love kagome...but all in all i had read and love all your stories.. You are really very good .. Thank you
Good story with an interesting plot. Great job
Awe this was an awesome story. I loved it. It was of course very well written. Kikyou, the evil little bitch, got what she deserved and I was glad that Inuyasha gave her the boot. A one shot very well done for your first time. Execellent job!