You have me intrigued by your story. I look forward to more. 

Hey, I really want to see where this is going. Please update soon!

This sounds intruiging so far. Please write more chpaters soon.

This has caught my interest and would like to know what time period is this story is set in.  Looking forward to future updates. Good job.

Interesting

I Saw this fic and I was like Oh HELL Ya, and i Wasnt Disapointed.

Cute! Please continue, i wanna see where this goes.

I think this is really interesting there are some words missing in some sentences but other than that I think this story has great potential.  I think I will be really great. I really liked how Seshoumaru was debating on if to tell her she's got something on her tooth or not, cause we all do that in our daily interactions with people. 

ja ne till next time and keep up the great work

Has potential, needs a bit of proof reading, and "Canon" isn't really the correct tag for it.

Keep it coming.  .seems interesting :)

Not bad. There were some "little annoying" grammatical mistakes, but nothing alittle proof reading won't fix. =) A little editing will make a smooth reading for the readers! Very interesting storyline, indeed. Please continue!