Please update again soon. This was an excellent chapter.
Oh my....
well then, that had quite a bit of heat to it *fans self*
I still want to know about her clan though, theyre very secretive its crazy. i need answers!!
i hope you have loads more to come, im excited to read it
Lady T (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Feb 2016
Omg I need the next few updates!!
Ooooooh SNAP!!! They done did it now. I'm thinking Kagome takes all the wounds of the person shes tied to, or maybe all the woulds incrued by the clan maybe? This chapter was sooo freakin awesome. I'm sad Rin has died but I guess it was needed to make Sesshoumaru into the demon he will become. I wonder how everyone else will be introduced. This is such a unique plot that I just can't fathom what will happen, not enough clues yet.
ja ne till next time and keep up the great work
AAAAHHHH SOOOO Great!!! please continue!!
Deana (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Feb 2016
Awesome chapter! I am guessing that Kagome is taking all of her clans injuries during a fight. More please.
Aw he is so cool want to protect his dearest!
Mona (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Feb 2016
Perfect!!! I can not wait to read the next chapter.
I am still fascinated with this story but why did you have to kill little Rin off? Was Tensaiga not available at the time that InuPapa could have used it to revive Rin and take her away from that evil village? Poor Kagome can never gat a break. She is so much the underdog in just about every other story I have read. I am going to try and stick with this story because it is intriguing with so many unanswered questions that my curiosity has gotten the better of me. LOL. The story is beautifully written. Keep up the good work. Update soon with some answers.
Wow I like your relationship of kagome and sesshy but this is so sad. And how Rin died am not sure if I will continue to read but wish you all the best and hope to read more of another story if you decide to write one good luck.
OK a little confused but good story looking forward to seeing more.
I'm with Taisho, what the heck did they do? Whose soul is tied to Kagomes? Are they tied to each other or blocked from each other? Why is she hated so much? She got too much power or favor from the Kamis? Well, if she had favor from the Kamis I doubt they would harm her that badly but hey people do crazy things. I loved the way you depicted a yound Sesshoumaru. I could just imagine his antics and stuff with Kagome from your descriptions. He's a little OC put I don't even care because it's just that good. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
Oh gosh! If that is a spell to bind two souls together, I shudder to think whose souls were joined and for what purpose!!! That clan may be immune to time but apparently they aren't immune to evil!!! Inu no Tashio needs to open up a can of whop-a** on them for doing that to poor Kagome!!! By bein so evil that clan should lose what grace the Kamis have given them!!! I can't wait to read and find out! Thanks!
Shisaa (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Jan 2016
I really enjoyed this first chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Very interesting. I cant wait to see what happens to this
Deana (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Jan 2016
Excellent first chapter. Can't wait for more.
Keep it coming!!
Somiant (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Jan 2016
I am already hooked , i like how you portrait a young Sesshomaru.I would love to see how he will change.thanks for sharing ????
Excelente capítulo, me encanta :)
Continúa por favor.
What an amazing first chapter. I am totally hooked and mystified by this story already. I really can't wait to find out more about Kagome and her clan. I also want to know what happened to her and why her clan would treat her like they did. I hope you update soon. Keep up the amazing work!!
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