Awwww he's so sweet, but in a very Sesshomaru-esque kind of way, no OOC-ness here ;)
'I dislike crying.' For him to say that aloud, I can imagine him actually panicking in his own mind 'Kami, she's going to cry... no, please, don't cry...' lol
Good chapter. I loved it.
Dewa mata
Poor Souta. But he really loves his sister very much, doesn't he?
I love this story. It really reminds me of those people, geniuses we call them, that made our world how it is now.
Your characterisation of Kagome, Sesshomaru, and Miroku, is very good, the taiyoukai being my favorite by far (but I'm being partial here lol).
I look forward to your next chapter.
Dewa mata
Ashes (Chapter 6) - Fri 26 Dec 2008
You updated! I'm soooooo happy! Yay! *super happy dance* I liked the blatant step forward this chapter is. Even though there was really nothing fantasical about it I got the definate impression that something was going to happen very soon. Well written, I really like how you portrayed Souta, it made me think of my own little brother. Thanks so much for comming back.
Taramarand (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 Sep 2008
Please, please, please update this!!!!!!!! I must MUST know what happens next!!!!!
kedala (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Jul 2008
I hope you haven't abandoned this story. Your writing is absolutely wonderful and being able to stumble upon a piece on this site that isn't riddled with grammatical errors that make you want to pull out your hair is like finding a needle in a hay stack. Then, to couple that with a unique plot and wonderfully drawn characters, well, you get your story.
Please update soon!! K
Coraline (Chapter 5) - Sun 06 Jul 2008
The frequency of your updates is maddening, but I fear it is the length of time between chapters that allows you to produce such superior work. I shall be patient, if you promise to keep writing.
This is a very fascinating fic. I love how the essay plays along with the story, it is very in depth, a lot of thought has been put into it. I love it!
I cant wait until you continue.
good luck
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