I nearly died when Kagome went back to South America at the end of chapter 9. I'm glad it ended up the way it did—and for the reasons it did. I greatly enjoyed reading this tipsy-turvy, emotional ride. Thanks for sharing!
This was really beautiful and had a similar tone that Pale Morrigain had (loved that one too). You manage to create an OC that fits really well within the group with a fully fleshed out personality and a place in the story.
There were moments that I had a hard time determining whose perspective the thoughts were coming from and I apologize that I didn't keep track of where it was - but I think it was during Kagome's reflection of the first miscarriage. I got confused because it appeared to be Kagome but then I saw Kaia's name being the one recalling the incident. And then, I could have totally misread it.
Regardless, this was really lovely and thank you for once again sharing your gift with us!
Leaora (Chapter 10) - Fri 08 Jan 2016
This was the best, worst, saddest, happiest, most beautifully horrendous tale I have ever read! Thank God it's over. Will there be more? I promise to read and review because this just jerked my emotions through the entire spectrum in just a few hours.
Thank you, SO VERY MUCH, for gracing us with yet another of your beautiful stories! Always so beautifully crafted, developed with such care and attention to detail, and so full of emotional depth... *contented sigh* My only regret is that I swallowed it down WAY too fast. Eh, guess it's time to go back and re-read all my Ivy favorites, then, isn't it? Again, so many thanks!
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~~Wiccan~~
Haven (Chapter 10) - Fri 08 Jan 2016
I couldn't imagine the black hair at first and Sess' personality being so not him, which was the hardest part to get over but I enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing.
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