Dun dun dun! And the wicked witch enters!
Fantastic job on this chapter, as per usual. I swear I am addicted to this story. Seeing Kagome's growth, her interaction with Shippo, and with her pack is so much fun and truly makes you invested in the characters and narrative. (:
Lauren (Chapter 17) - Thu 07 Jul 2016
I feel conflicted about the background chapters. I was and am really excited for them, but they're always upsetting so I hate that I like them. This one was well written, as always, and I apprecite the deeper look at Eito and Nat and the connection the rest of the family had with her, as well as how they took her death. Thank you for not writing about her actual death.
Ah, such a sweet chapter with Shippo and some bonding with Raiden~
The comment about Eito being possessive of Nat has me wondering... I wonder how the males deal (especially Sesshoumaru ) with Kagome being fertile once a month, or maybe she uses some form of BC so as not to annoy anyone's sense of smell on a monthly basis. Maybe it's just no big deal with unmated females.
Lea (Chapter 18) - Wed 06 Jul 2016
T.T YAS shippo and kagome intereaction! ugh love them together and love how this story is progressing. you have weaved such an interesting plot and im excited to continue reading :)
Lauren (Chapter 18) - Wed 06 Jul 2016
I just got a Twitter and an Instagram account and I would totally follow you.
Your chapters are fantastic. The drama that is swirling around~ I love it. I can't speak for everyone, but as long as you don't abandon the story, I think we'll forgive you for long waits. ????
Lea (Chapter 16) - Tue 28 Jun 2016
just came back from vacation and Lord praise I come back to a new chapter! and not just a new chapter but one that features some Sessho/Kagome lovin' ugh finally the ball is starting to roll. weeeeee so excited for Kagome to fully give herself to Sess and for him to treat her like the queen she is!
Bry (Chapter 15) - Mon 27 Jun 2016
I created an account, simply to review your story. I absolutely adore it. Please keep writing!! Now when you say you usualky post at 9 what timezone is that??
YAY! More background, it's wonderful how fully you develope the characters and make them so easy to get attached to. (:
Even the toughest men need help ur wisdom should b passed on loved it.
Wonderfully done! I love not only the story you're creating but your writing style flows so nicely~ The Background chapters are like the cherry on top of a delicious cake ^__^
katrina (Chapter 17) - Fri 24 Jun 2016
That was both the saddest and sweetest thing ever !!!! T^T
Wow. Good wow. Sad wow. Wow.
Zyren (Chapter 17) - Thu 23 Jun 2016
I really love these background views into the pack. It's nice to see supporting characters really get a chance to shine especially ones that aren't the immediate cannon inner circle. I love the pack dynamics and all of their relationships especially between Raiden and Sesshoumaru. It's really showing how much of himself Sesshoumaru has to put into being Alpha and taking care of his pack. I love it all. Thank you.
Leticia (Chapter 17) - Thu 23 Jun 2016
I liked how you made Sesshomarus and Raidens relationship they are the best of friends. I felt so bad for Eito and him loosing his mate now i understand how bad it was at the beginning. But i still loved the background chapter
Elspeth (Chapter 17) - Thu 23 Jun 2016
T^T *sniff sniff* Uwah!
T-T omg that was just wow... I appreciate the trigger warning. I have been there my self
i was preppy of a lot worse.. But I did cry omg this was just so go I think it fits too great update
You worry overmuch. This chapter is darkly endearing! I look forward to reading more of your work. Safe travels.
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