Fantastic chapter. Always did like Totosai and MoMo. I like how you are protraying them as crazy old coots in the story but are actually spry with a few tricks up their sleeves that will keep Sess and Kags on their toes to keep their game up. Whats up with Miroku? He is acting a bit off with Sango. I am so looking for more updates soon and still waiting for that face to face time with S/K lol :)
This was so good! I'm glad I decided to give it a chance. Though I know you said this wasn't based off any story/movie, it reminds me of a really strange combination of the movie 'Ender's Game' and the horror game 'Dead Space', with some elements of the anime 'Elemental Gelade'. Since Dead Space was a horror game, I was really apprehensive about continuing after the first 2 chapters, but couldn't help the pull of the story.
Please keep up the great work and I'm looking towards your next updates!
That was a worth the read chap
Amazinggg
Jaken (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 May 2016
Sesshy lost against totosai?? Lame..
Mona (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 May 2016
it has been awhile since I've read an update and this was a good one. I still wonder what Miroku's issue with Kagome are and hope you can update again soon.
Leaora (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 May 2016
I imagine the real Totosai has dreamed of the ability to kick Sesshomaru's butt even once. Each chapter is more entertaining than the last. Please keep going!!!
I loved this story and that's saying a lot since I don't do aliens at all. U have a great imagination since it's not from any book or movies. So it was definitely worth leaving my input on. Great story and I hope u update very soon
I'm so glad I gave this story a chance. It's so good that I was late for work because I couldn't put it down! Lol.
Always looking forward to this wonderful story!! Great work!
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